Yui's part only for now.

DILF nothing, that's a fat bastard variant.

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I can buy that he can beat and maul a person without repercussions, somehow. What I can't buy is why is anyone still going to school after that.
"The principal molested a girl and clearly intended to rape her, someone tried to stop him and got beaten and got his hands cut off because of it...see you on Monday"

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What? Did he just? Bro this so mess up.

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Idk why you can't find a native proofreader. Besides the overall bad grammar, this reads extremely poorly. I can literally tell the JP sentences from your translation (or rather, machine translation.)

rough grammar

p.4 this man is a bad news
p.4 yeah... kind of oppressive > missing "he's" but also this doesn't make much sense
p.4 if this man comes > ? come where
p.5 how about we make a stop by > cut "make a"
p.6 i've > kinda weird to contract "I have" here
p.8 In this way, in modern literature, themes, subjects [...] > this is complete nonsense
p.8 principal, is there something... > Is something the matter, Principal...?
p.8 I just do a tour > I'm just doing
p.10 Indonesian sentence lol
p.12 You're breaking a law > the law

and more

Also, do you REALLY need TWO credit pages?

Last edited on 20 November 2023, 00:35.

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Did you fill the bubbles out yourself or is a non-transparent bubble ver. out there?

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Wtf Ugly Bastard commit crimes as its normal and nobody report him to Police? Well its hentai so Police not exsist in this world. So Ugly Bastard go full on Judge Dredd mode i am a Law. Damn poor teacher get his hands cut off cuz try to protect girl. And all others have power to stop him but jest let him go? Maybe this Ugly Bastard from same league as this one /g/2554348/582ec38377/? Cuz he do same things fuck the law cuz he is law.

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@vulture_ireng dude, next time use chatgpt to correct your English grammar/spellings, it's literally free

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THIS is seriously fucked up. You have to be wrong in the head to fap to this.

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I agree with @Chris2999, this one is just weird.

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Lmao wtf is going on? At least give us a flimsy excuse like hypnosis or something.

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Temen lu ga ada yang bisa bahasa inggris apa bro? Cari lah yang bisa proofread

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i need there to be at least some logic before i start fapping....

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NTR hypnosis/mindcontrol is so low tier yet I'm willing to accept it in this scenario because just how fucking ridiculous this is. Fuck it man any some sort of excuse would have been enough.
That said after page 17 whoever still went to school deserve all the bad shit that happens there.

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@Yukipo~ @ChronicLogic why would you need mind control here? He is clearly doing some mafia-type stuff, with the "accidents" that befall his enemies but arent traced back to him. Maybe its bribes, blackmailing officials or just connections, but the result is the same. The explaination is here, its just not stated outright

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There are only 2 types of perfect anime girls. Tanlined tomboys with pixie cut and thick librarian girls with glasses and braids.

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I AM THE LAW

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School shooters got nothing on these NPC'S.

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Meh, nice concept but the art is really below average...

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artist is just taking the piss lmao

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This translation hurt my eyes, body, and soul. It was worse than NTR part 😢

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ENG:

Look, the idea is STUPID since it DOES NOT DETAIL you why the SON-BITCH DIRECTOR IS POWERFUL, WHICH ANYONE FEARS HIM, "BUT" NOOOO!! IT DOESN'T TELL YOU ANYTHING ABOUT ANYTHING.....

He only draws the conclusions that he is the BOSS AND OBEYS EVERYTHING, that is already SOMETHING RIDICULOUS....

If IT HAD BEEN WITH A HYPNOTISM DEVICE, IT "WOULD HAVE" been different but nothing....

Look, I WOULD SAY THIS IS SOMETHING RIDICULOUS, I mean if I were ONE MILLION PERSON WHO IS NOT IN FAVOR OF WHAT THAT SON OF A BITCH IS DOING, ARE YOU AFRAID OF HIM?.... PLEASE!!

I should have specified the AUTHOR'S SLUMBER more so that the story was SPECIFIC, NO?......

And it makes me laugh that it says "MYSTERIOUS THAT THEY GOT HIT", but in fact I SUPPOSE it's a YAKUZA OR THE PRESIDENT'S FRIEND, but it doesn't just say SOMETHING SIMPLE to make it so ABSURD...

Anyway... I SUPPOSE there will be a TRAGIC ENDING for that SON OF A BITCH, right?..... the author starts to lose points......

SPA:
Mira la idea es ESTUPIDA ya que NO TE DETALLA el porque el DIRECTOR HIJO PUTA SEA PODEROSO, CUAL CUALQUIER PERSONA LO TEMEN, "PERO" NOOOO!! NO TE DICE NADA DE NADA.....

Solamente se saca las conclusiones de que el es el JEFE Y TODO LO OBEDESCA, eso ya es ALGO RIDICULO....

Si HUBIERA SIDO CON UN ARTEFACTO DE HIPNOTISMO, "HUBIERA" sido diferente pero nada....

Mira yo en si DIRIA ES ALGO RIDICULO, osea si fuera UN MILLON DE PERSONA QUE NO ESTA A FAVOR CON LO QUE HACE ESE HIJO DE PUTA, EN SI... LE TIENEN MIEDO?.... POR FAVOR!!

Debio especificar mas el BABOSO DEL AUTOR para que la historia sea ESPECIFICA NO?......

Y me da risa que pone "MISTERIOSO QUE SALIERON GOLPEADOS", men en si me SUPONGO que sea un YAKUZA O EL AMIGO DEL PRESIDENTE, pero no solo pone ALGO SIMPLON para que sea tan ABSURDO...

En fin... me SUPONGO que habra un FINAL TRAGICO para ese HIJO DE PUTA no?..... comienza a bajar puntos autor......

JAP:

ほら、誰もが彼を恐れる息子ビッチ監督がなぜ強力であるのかを詳しく説明していないので、その考えは愚かです、「でも」ダメです!!それは何もあなたに何も教えてくれません....

彼は、自分がボスであり、すべてに従うという結論だけを導き出します。それはすでに何かばかげています...

催眠装置があれば、状況は「変わっただろう」が、何もありませんでした...

ほら、これはばかばかしいことだと言うでしょう、つまり、もし私がこのクソ野郎のやっていることを支持しない100万人の人間だったら、あなたは彼を恐れていますか?....お願いします!!

ストーリーを具体的にするために、作者の眠りをもっと特定するべきでしたね……

そして、「彼らが襲われたのは謎だ」と書いてあるのは笑ってしまいますが、実際にはヤクザか大統領の友人だと思いますが、それをそれほど不条理にするために単純なことを言っているだけではありません...

とにかく...あのクソ野郎には悲劇的な結末があると思いますね?....作者は減点し始めます....

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This is really stupid.

I mean if you wanna do that kind of plot the principal need some proper kind of power.

Just threatening people isn't enough.

At least if he had all the staffs corrupted as well it would make some sense

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