This needs to be translated pronto. Wow.

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The story is pretty simply and based on the PC Discipline game ending 3 I believe.

The first few pages setup Saori making an adult video with the schools lowest grade human male, because she's a slave now and that the video will be distributed worldwide. We are basically just telling being told all of the above and that if Saori doesn't cooperate she'll force her to have sex with 100 men instead of the guy shown, so Saori agrees.

The next few pages are basically just scene after scene that is filmed for the adult video.

Next the video is shown in the gym in front of the entire school body, just before the school festival with Reona announcing that Saori will be apart of the festival for a 100 man sex marathon (Saori only seems surprised by this twist like she forgotten the earlier threat)

Which basically leads into the school festival which is now a sex festival with the Saori's dorm mates playing a large part of it since they lost the baseball game.

Karen (white haired girl) is show enjoying her fetish for eating sperm adding a nice touch of depth to the doujinshi.

I'm not sure if the ending is really NTR...maybe only for the readers who have played the game...

My only regret is that we don't get to see a full page inking for the cover of one of Saori's adult videos, all we get is just a little shot in a small caption window near the end. It would have been cool if the doujinshi cover was made-up like an adult video since thats half the theme besides the festival.

Saori herself gets VERY little dialog like "he's eating?" or "100 men?"

I'm sure it will be translated (I'm too lazy to do all that photoshop editing) but really what you see is what you get. Theres no "surprises" in the dialog that mislead what you visually see.

Again this doujinshi is based on the epilogue to ending 3, where everything we see in the doujinshi is mention to have happened soon after in the game.

In review personally I prefer this work of Finecraft69 to his last Discipline doujinshi "Damaged" because it stays more in line to the original endings epilogue. Damage didn't really "do" anything exciting with the material where FES has. Finecraft also appears to be more comfortable drawing the characters and had added a lot of depth to the doujinshi via scenes taking place outside of Saori's storyline. Overall great doujinshi!

BTW the Doujinh's title "FES" stands for Festival, aka School Festival.

At the end finecraft69 announces a new Discipline doujinshi for winter...hopefully we'll get some Reona action!

-SatinCreamDelight

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Finecraft69 is one of my TOP-10 hentai artists ^_^

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nice summary satinc but i can't believe your still hung up on the Reona/Leona thing. just let it go man...

great comic, looking forward to an english scan.

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靠shotacon的tag找到这个，虽然shotacon的图片就那么一小片。弥补了动画和游戏的遗憾，nice啊

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