The shading on the final few images was really wonderful, and the first part was obviously hot. The frame where the egg protrudes from her anus is crazy hot.
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Some corrections: on page 4/5 the last/first bubble was faultily duplicated so there is one missing (which actually should be there in the translation script i think).
concerning translation errors: page09: -"Don't worry. With this ass of yours you'll be able to lay the eggs easily..." >a more accurate translation would be: "It's nothing to be ashamed of. In fact it'll make it easier for you to lay the eggs..."
page10 (fucked up all the lower bubbles back then -_-): wrong: -"seems the beautiful student is getting pretty turned on, huh...by getting her ass cultivated that is" >should be more like: "you're enjoying it pretty much, huh? to think a beauty like you got her ass developed like that already..." (implying she had anal sex with other men before)
wrong: -"kuun...that...that's not true...it's just...the enemies until now were..." >should instead say something like: "that's not how it is...it's the fault of my enemies I encountered until now...", or the like. pretty cryptic but in short she simply wants to invalidate the impression of her being a slut.
wrong: -"nevertheless, the spawning of the eggs has already started as expected, hasn't it?" >correct translation: "but it sure at least is your first time being impregnated with eggs, isn't it"
wrong: -"Hehehe... though you're an enemy, it turns out that you're no ordinary college student after all" >it should be translated like this: "Ha! "Enemy" you say? So as expected you're no ordinary student after all!"
@Fffffff123: eat shit and die
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I wish there was a groping and felt up by Kaolinite part, or a Germatoids minions ( the white Cyclop goon that frenches her) gangbang of her. and maybe a English version of the one with Neptune and Uranus.