Has potential, but feels like it's cut short.

Also I wish more authors of comics like these put just a little research into text bubbles. You know, like (a) keeping dialog short per image, (b) never do a "HUD" style (purple border), (c) instead use text bubbles (keeping them clear of the important parts of the image, and planning out 'dead space' in your render that you know will be used for those text bubbles), (d) and just have the patreon link in a corner (since content makers do deserve to be paid for their efforts; but again, plan on a corner of the render where you know this link will always exist and avoid having too much "action" happen in that corner of the screen).

Base +6