Let me know if it needs any corrections.

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Wait she calls herself an incubus but she isn't a male ? Is that also the case in the original text or is it a translation error ?

Edit : wait I've reread it and no, my bad he is male but has breast on page 8 ?

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Thank you very much for the translation. You appear to have fallen for the newbie trap of using the 1280x resampled images instead of the original raw images for this translation. By default e-hentai displays 1280x resampled images for all galleries unless you have the source nexus hath perk enabled. The original images in the raw of this gallery ( /g/2085182/8f4f627715/ ) have a resolution of 1984 x 2806 while the images you've used for this translation have a resolution of 1280 x 1810. There are a few ways to download the original images for a given gallery. Information on how to download images from galleries can be found on this page: https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Downloading
The easiest way is to press the "Archive Download" button to the right of the gallery tags and then select "Download Original Archive". This costs GP (gallery points). Alternatively, if a torrent is available for the original images (don't download torrents that mention the number 1280), the torrent can be downloaded without needing GP.

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