My girlfriend first comic she wrote

no my jam but the artwork is solid...add a sister getting fucked by her brother and it will be my jam then

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Sir Vicious thats my jam too. But this is my girlfriends comic and she likes yaoi

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@Sir Vicious: Man, don't fuck your sister... That's what cousins are for.

@besh: you didn't say if she was looking for a critique, so here does anyway. The art is solid, as SV noted: you can go far on a cartoony style. The humor of the ridiculously casual attitude to homosexuality carries the six pages of otherwise PWP ("plot? what plot?", which is the literal meaning of yaoi in Japanese).

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