The dialogue is alot better than I expected.

Base +6, Und3adgam3r +7, Pyramus1227 +3, Trentai +6, IcyHot32 +8, SectionBR +6, quazkov -22

This was very good. Actually did a really good job in both dialogue, scenes, and progression.

Base +7, Und3adgam3r +7, Straphalarius +1, IcyHot32 +8, quazkov -22

Fingering a girl's pussy, make her orgasm, and say "lol gross" afterward. Good job !

Base +17, Und3adgam3r +7, Straphalarius +1, Gabs999 +6, IcyHot32 +8, quazkov -22

I've been waiting for this one to show up. Finally, a wholesome nagatoro work!

Base +7, Und3adgam3r +7, Trentai +6, IcyHot32 +8, quazkov -22

This is so good, captures the spirit of the original perfectly.

Base +6, Und3adgam3r +7, RevZ +9, Trentai +6, IcyHot32 +8, SectionBR +6, quazkov -22

This script for the newest season looks awesome.

Base +8, Gabs999 +6, IcyHot32 +8, SectionBR +6, quazkov -22

Couldn't get past the crushing feeling of loneliness that the first couple of pages generated. Had to pull my hands out of my pants and just stare at the screen while I let this gnawing emptiness passed over me. I am sure that the rest of the comic is full of decent vanilla lovemaking and wholesome in character dialogue but I just can't do it, not tonight.

>tfw no Nagatoro gf....

Base +6, boo9 +6, SectionBR +6

Couldn't even jerk off from how sweet this is.

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I could ignore layout issues and be grateful, but damn, page 32 is something. You seriously drew Nagatoro tears that weren't in original doujin and made her forced apology for "bullying"? In original doujin, in this scene she's just wary of rushing things and in original series, Nanashi doesn't think their first meeting is this awful that she needed "dramatic apology", where did you get that from? While we're laughing at lowcowalizers being replaced by AI, you decided it would be okay to run narrative because YOU personally have a grudge against Nagatoro? I never thought I'd encounter such stupidity by "fans"

Base +5, 3dsssdds -6, Oblast -6, quazkov +22, dachau12 +5

It's not even that deep bro. Imagine being mad about a non canon hentai comic. That's wild. But like I explained on page 2 alot of the Google translations were unintelligible or rough. I just used the context of the panel and made an assumption based off how everything else played out. I even reached out to Novannix and asked if it was okay to make that change and was given the okay prior to them going ghost.

Base +3, 3dsssdds +6, quazkov -22

YOU'RE VAGINA!

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I'm just sorry that people will be introduced to this not badly written dojin through your mindset and "author was okay with it". Nagatoro doesn't have a lot of good vanilla content to compromise with people like you and yes, I'm angry as hell. I have a normal translation of this doujin from someone who knew what he was doing, but since I downloaded it from 4chan thread and don't even know who translator is, I can't share it. That makes me even angrier

Base +5, quazkov +22, dachau12 +5, alllifeinfate +6

MY FUCKING HEART! IT'S TOO CUTE!

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