Okay, I loved this!

The facial depictions were spot-on. I'm used to FMA doujin looking very little like the real characters. The art here is awesome! Love the story, love its relevance to FMA-verse, and gosh, Riza looks hot with piercings and a chain!

Base +1, Red_Vodka +2, arkanfel +5, laaronadnxl +7, Sereaphim +7, Savader +7, nww +4, NotReligious +3, Lolzmang -7, Alexiender +7, firstnocture +12, klangstargatari +10, blacklisted86 +6, and 2 more...

I give it 2 out 5

Base +2, Red_Vodka -2, arkanfel -5, laaronadnxl -7, Sereaphim -7, Savader -7, openminded20 -5, kaluak -7, underachiever101 +5, GodModeGOD -4, nww -4, DaBlackX -7, Baka_Ouji -8, and 5 more...

A brilliant doujin by Azaske Wind. This is true netorare and very much in tune with the original story.

Base +7, blacklisted86 +6, ShadowMKII +6, wonderbread08 +6, akunoko -28, Ginzaki +7

it could just be that I'm drunk, but it seems like all the doujins by this artist/production company are super fucked up. it's all just rape. Legit rape, not girl surrenders to her amoral base desires like most hentai. It's just art depicting women getting raped. I've jacked it to some extremely fucked up stuff, but for some reason I can't fap to this.

Base +6, The Inker -8, ShadowMKII +6, extremophile +6, inkarian21 +6, wonderbread08 -6, morbious37 -6, kenabrxg +15, akunoko -28, Ginzaki -7, Yossarian762 +7

The artwork is really good, though I guess I kind of understand why someone would want to do that lame rewrite, simply because it doesn't seem very much like Mustang or Riza to give in like this (particularly Mustang), so they could've put a little more resistance/personality in them (which, IMO would make the doujin more interesting).

Still its nice to see a doujin featuring Riza and Mustang like this.

Overall, not a bad doujin.

Last edited on 14 April 2017, 06:16.

Base +5, Akiron -7, wonderbread08 +6, Zerotation +6, damnspams +7

Pretty good but Hawkeye and Mustang are way to out of character. Too passive.

Base +6, The Inker -8

作者是魔鬼吗_(:з」∠)_

Base +6, crystalbabee -6

I swear this had anal in it.

Base +7