Don't let me stop anyone from reading or continuing to make fan works of the series. But, my impression of this sample gallery is the it is a childish replication of the public execution scene with added piss and spontaneous lactation. It also has poor and inconsistent proportions. Following that is a rewrite of the ensuing plot that uses meta knowledge to somehow make it more incoherent and pulled out the ass than the actual source work's plot.
Art 3. Plot 2. Sexiness 2. English 3. True to character 4. All out of 10.
Base +10, killerrabbit1 -7, nokacob -4, Cenkic +6, yupokamusi +8