Machine translated with rephrasing for proper grammar. Tried to redraw to remove censor bars but got tired of it.

>MTL
You retards will never learn

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Amazing how a machine has better spelling and punctuation skills than you. It's bad enough you got tired of drawing, you even became tired of using English properly.

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Another doujin ruined by machine translation.

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"Proper grammar."

You have a typo on the second page of the actual translation (pg 12) - ITECAUSE instead of IT BECAUSE.

How do you mess that up?

"got tired of it."

Well that explains everything.

FYI to everybody else, if you are going to half-ass a translation, don't bother.

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>Machine translated
tagging rtl (uploader comment)

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