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Good stuff.......there's more story content than you'd normally expect from this kind of work, but the action is great........thanks a lot for all the effort and sharing to all involved, nice work :)

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Haven't seen a crafty NTR like this this quite a while, thanks.

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Kid fights back but has plot against him. Implied they also raped his sister at the end on the phone.

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NTR like this is why I always skip to the end first lol, massive boner killer

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This was the bees knees

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This is so absurd. Just call the cops. The dude lost all his leverage. Also this just seems like straight up rape.

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NTR like this is why I skip to the end, to check if its a stupid normie snoozefest for me to skip

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I wanted 50/50 split between mother and sister. This is boring.

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If there is a sequel the only thing I'm interested in is revenge of some kind on these guys. I'll settle for nothing less.

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Iwill need a car battery , rope, a weed wacker, and battery acid also a plausible alibi, i see three idiots that need to be removed from the census

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Pretty good buildup but the pay off is a little too weak because it doesn't try anything different than the usual blackmail/rape plot. There's no stakes by the end and in retrospective it's kind of stupid. Anyways I can't wait for part 2.

That said like someone already mentioned the ending is really absurd... since the kid has literally no reason at all to just go to the police and have them arrested. I mean I know he's just a NTRman but that was so stupid and he walks away like he's some sort of supervillain. Man, only Pops was smart enough to just fucking escape as fast as he could lmao.

Base +6, pooppandapoo +6, 58569 +6, EgocentricEgg +2

Pops gonna have post nut clarity regret at the end. Especially if the whole neighborhood knows you.

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I don't think there is any Netorare happening in this. She just gets raped. No one steals his girl.

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Pretty good overall. The mom deserved all that for bringing a guy like hiro into her home and giving him direct access to her children. WTF was she thinking? don't tell me she didn't know he was like that. She was with that dude for years and it's implied they were involved in some freaky shit. Dude was good sexfriend material sure but bringing him into her home was seriously fkked up of her. No sympathy. Poor Yuzu-chan tho.

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Good stuff with great build up, wish more artist would take their time. Loved the rape and filming part especially since it does not have the classic mindbreak part where the women loves it in the middle of it.
I would have loved to see how the video was sold and maybe the impact it would have on the mom, still way better than I expected.

On a side note, do people really expect the plot to make sense in the real world? Do you guys watch porn and complain it is not real?

Base +6

Sequel gonna be good

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Who’s name was that on the phone? Nbg

Base +14

Very excited for the second part. I'm looking forward to seeing his sister's fall and the consequences going forward. Pops and Onee-chan would make a cute couple.

Base +6, NSTRX -6

part 2 is out, hopefully someone will upload the raw soon

Last edited on 19 July 2024, 16:18.

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