This is not a solid comic (yet) it's more of a compedium of the ongoing story of Alexa and Cherry over Midas Bust's art accounts. So if it feels a bit loosely disconnected you know why

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The femdom and petplay tags don't really fit. This is just a couple muscular women flirting and having sex. One panel of a girl wearing a collar and leash does not a d/s or petplay relationship make.

Art 6. Plot 6. Sexiness 5. English 6. All out of 10.

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They're a cute couple, especially the first 3 pages. I feel like this could go somewhere neat if it had a little more explanation of what the non-goop was, where she gets it from, or had more of a growth focus. I like that Cherry is always significantly smaller or bigger than Alexa depending on the form. This is an intriguing start, but 16 pages in it hasn't gone very far yet.

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