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I'm normally against having to entirely rely on MTL, but since 1. The original is in Chinese 2. It's pretty niche stuff, and 3. It's been already 2 years since its release, the chances of it getting a proper translation at this point are pretty much close to 0.
Thankfully, the story (or lack thereof) is quite simple, so the result should be decent enough. The only part I (or rather the machine) couldn't quite get is what the girl says on page 9 (and page 25 to a lesser extent). I'd appreciate some input from someone who understands Chinese.

Edit: Thanks coolyangzc for your comment. Used it to improve the translation.

Hi, I'm here to let you know what the original contents mean. Just for you reference. Feel free to use any idiomatic EN expressions.

Page 9:
Some tinies are running away?
How disobedient, and are they green ones? New to the market? (meaning: the green tinies are not common from girl's POV)

Page 25: "bloom" here means "explode/burst" in CN, so maybe change to boom/splash or sth else.

BTW, ("军鬼"≈ Ghost) is the codename of the main male character, like "Volcano" and "Otto" for other soldiers.

Other pages look fine.

With best wishes.

Last edited on 11 January 2024, 02:07.

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>I'm normally against having to entirely rely on MTL, but
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