[Egaki Numa] Namaiki na Gal Ane o Ore no Houhou de Wakaraseru Koto ni Shita Hi 1-5 | The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way Ch. 1-5 [English] [Ongoing]

Posted on 23 January 2024, 15:11 by: BuyVelomobiles

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I compiled it all, since it's a pain to keep track of the main story, and also the fanbox.Also makes the timeline for all this much clearer.

Posted on 23 January 2024, 16:14 by: Raynauld

THAT'S WHY YOU'RE THE GOAT‼️ THANKS FOR COMPILING THESE

Posted on 23 January 2024, 18:02 by: B1u3z

Raws fucking where? "LOL."

Posted on 23 January 2024, 18:39 by: BuyVelomobiles

@B1u3z Her fanbox.

Posted on 23 January 2024, 20:24 by: likeyouknowwhatever

A slutty tsundere with a brother complex sure is an interesting take on the gyaru formula.

Posted on 23 January 2024, 21:10 by: blazeblue23

How...wholesome? Is that the word?

Posted on 23 January 2024, 22:21 by: BuyVelomobiles

It is most definitely not wholesome. But the author sure wants it to be.

P.S.: Now we're stuck with a rape tag on nhen because some moron slipped it in at the last second.

Last edited on 24 January 2024, 01:21.

Posted on 24 January 2024, 13:09 by: bladez

What do you mean? The first pages are literally rape. Author clearly shows she's uncomfortable, doesn't want to drink but is forced to.

Posted on 24 January 2024, 13:52 by: BuyVelomobiles

Literally nobody forces her to drink. They tell her to, and she does it immediately. She's decided to stay at the drinking party, despite the fact that she's been able to step away at any point; and now she's drinking. And being "forced" to drink isn't rape either way, since she's clearly DTF. It's the entire point of the character, and the story makes it clear at every step of the way that this is what she does, regularly, of her own free will. Chapter 4 is basically entirely dedicated to making the fanbox bits (Which I've spliced into the main story here) specifically canon. The character is shy, and reserved, and uncomfortable until the fanbox segments kick in. Then she's an enthusiastic NTR slut. It's the main issue with the story: The author is trying to play every single angle at once.

Posted on 24 January 2024, 20:04 by: bladez

You're clearly an incel who doesn't have a slightest idea how rapes happen and all you know is victim blaming. Stop spending time on your alt-right subreddits and shit. I can imagine that if you got raped by several men while drinking with them, obviously it's your fault because you should be expecting it? Her face and demeanour clearly show discomfort and unwillingness. Women being pressed into sex is legally rape in most developed countries. Maybe it's not from your backwater pos country who knows. Ch. 4 clearly shows she didn't go to the dudes apartment for sex but to retrieve a belonging and once again was pressured into sex, e.g. rape.

Posted on 24 January 2024, 21:15 by: BuyVelomobiles

Being "pressured" into sex isn't rape any more than being "pressured" to go somewhere is kidnapping. The entire premise of the story is that she's a gyaru slut. This isn't some inference by the audience, but a literal declaration both in the title, and the story itself by way of the narrator. The author is trying to play every angle at once by making her shy and reserved for the public chapters, then an unrepentant slut in the fanbox chapters. But make no mistake: This is all consensual. That's why this story exists. The original version had non-con, and that got her banned off Pixiv. So the author's only hope to make the new, "wholesome correction" work is to make us feel bad for her in the regular story, while hiding away the fact that she's an active, enthusiastic participant in NTR gangbangs behind a paywall. She is literally going out of her way to have sex, and engage in sexual activity above and beyond what anyone asks of her. Half of the first chapter's sex pages are her enjoying an extended round of foreplay, despite the fact that the guys only want to put it in. Nobody told her to grind on them like that; that's all her.

The blowjob? Again, she knew what was going to happen, and as the chapter immediately showed, there were literally no consequences to just saying "no". She has never been under any duress, and whenever she begins participating in sexual activity, we see nothing but interest and enthusiasm on her part.

I will repeat myself: Being pressured to do things does not make it rape. You need to be coerced, or physically incapable of consenting. That doesn't mean you're a little buzzed, it means you can't even tell what's going on around you. And by god, she could tell what was going on around her at all times.

Posted on 24 January 2024, 22:44 by: VeloxNex

This is clearly and undoubtedly rape

Posted on 24 January 2024, 23:35 by: BuyVelomobiles

If you don't know what rape is. On that note, it's also obviously manslaughter, and forgery.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 01:46 by: tscecest

Yeah, that’s definitely rape.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 02:09 by: Zolken

Not an expert but this seems like rape yep.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 02:36 by: BuyVelomobiles

Definitely insurrection there. Anyone with eyes can see it.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 07:58 by: Shiriizu Tamashi

I think the OP is not that wrong. To consider it rape the FMC opinion must be taken into account, even if a bit pressured into drinking she was probably well aware of what was going on and the intent of the artist was indeed having her being happy with it and craving for more.
This work would have probably been more like "the great escape" than "metamorphosis" where you have to feel pity for the heroine.

But then very soon, like really soon... the story completely changed because readers were not okay with it and what was a blood related sibling whose sister was enjoying sex to her heart's content, became a stepbro (probably to fanbox him) and she suddenly was depicted visibly unconfortable during the BJ scene.
So if you read the first scene contextualized within the whole story, yep that's rape, but if you read it contextualized to the original (probably now abandoned) intent, it was just a gyaru having some fun.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 09:00 by: hatepie

Saying "no" and leaving is an option you lefty retards. She got "pressured" into being a slut, but she put herself in that situation and hung out with those guys, which is EXACTLY what her brother warned her against.

Posted on 25 January 2024, 12:07 by: BuyVelomobiles

@Shiriizu Tamashi I don't get why it's so hard for people to just understand a simple story like this. It's canon that she's a dirty gyaru slut. It's the premise of the story. This isn't the first time she's fucked, this isn't the first time she's fucked the guys from the party, the brother's canonically not a blood relative right from the start, and she even comes back to the guy sober, and before blowing him, the story tells us that she is, in fact, a woman of convenience that they call on for sex. He spends the whole time telling us that her not coming around for some undefined period of time is unusual, that he's "backed up" because of it (Meaning she's his only sexual release), and then asks her, firmly but politely, to come inside to help him with that. And no, she was not depicted as "visibly uncomfortable" during the BJ. She was showing all the signs of arousal, from sweating, to moaning, to blushing, and the hearts even made a comeback. And by his estimation, she gave that blowjob a HELL of a good effort. It's just that compared to the animalistic sex trance we saw her in the first time, she barely looks willing. But, much like in real life, people don't get hearts for eyes and shout at the top of their lungs when they're deepthroating some gigantic dick, regardless of their level of enthusiasm.

There's no rape, because she's been perfectly capable of walking away at any time with literally no consequence, and (Not that it matters, really, but) has enjoyed every last sexual thing that's happened to her immensely. The issue here is a combination of negative reading comprehension, where people get the story and answers spoon fed to them by the amateurish dialogue, and somehow reach the exact opposite conclusion anyway, and then also the fact that a shocking minority of people don't seem to actually know what constitutes rape!

She's been sleeping with them for ages, she's reluctant to spend time with basically anyone until the sex begins, and then she loves taking her time with foreplay, then having them get rough with her. There's nothing more to any of this. The author has gone well out of her way to remove literally any alternative explanation, like her being a virgin who was just pressured to become their Fuck Buddy right at the party, or her having slept with them because she was impaired by alcohol. I took great pains to translate the full meaning of the dialogue (Stilted as it may have been), and it personally annoys me when it seems like I could have just slammed my ass on the keyboard, and people would have understood the story about as well.

Posted on 26 January 2024, 03:58 by: LillySatou

Yapping levels are off the charts for someone so blatantly wrong

Posted on 26 January 2024, 05:13 by: zdude18

I think the first one is rape because she likely was drunk as fuck. Meanwhile the blowjob scene is not. She's totally sober for that. You could argue she's in an unfortunate position after fucking these guys, but unless he threatened to not let her leave with violence or something if she didn't suck him off, she could've just left on her own. Either way wholesome or rape tag this dude's art is goated so I'm here for it.

Posted on 26 January 2024, 07:40 by: woofle8

the title got me lmao, so the brother is actually wholesome trying to fix his gyaru step sister.

Posted on 26 January 2024, 12:52 by: BuyVelomobiles

@LillySatou It's shocking how confidently wrong they are.

@zdude 18 They were all drunk. It's a drinking party. And they invited her over to fuck her again. That's her role in all of this.

Posted on 27 January 2024, 01:49 by: lolz12344

Based series

Posted on 30 January 2024, 13:00 by: Iammuffin

I love rape! 😋
Also if anyone needs the raw for R18 parts, it's available at K since apparently their fanbox importer is online again and someone has generously importing it.

Posted on 31 January 2024, 08:51 by: Bulopu

There is nothing better than a porn site for the most irl revolting rapist human trash to come out of the woods.

Posted on 04 February 2024, 14:09 by: AnotherOneHere

What do you mean? The comment section on a pornographic website focused on presenting the best homosexual midget sex gifs are my favorite place to discuss the philosophical works of Thomas Carlyle. If I can, why can't this bloke advertise his strategy on how to get the ladies into terrifically tight velo cabins so that they may have consensual sexual intercourse? Remember, you can drink and be at the wheel but still not drive; this advice will hold up in court, good luck OP :^)

Posted on 06 February 2024, 17:12 by: Job John

Man, imagine being as much of an autistic fatass as that spaz.

Posted on 07 March 2024, 01:33 by: shadowknight007

Of course this was written by a woman lol

Posted on 19 March 2024, 14:49 by: Cxxxxxxx

Laws very by jurisdiction but this situation is unlikely to meet the legal definition of rape. (read: it doesn't in any jurisdiction that I am aware of).

People usually don't get naked and engage in intercourse without one of consent, force, or loss of consciousness.

In general for rape to occur one would need to be threatened, physically restrained, abused by someone in a "potion of trust", mentally disabled or unconscious.

Drunk - even very drunk - people can still give consent. If that wasn't true, every hookup bar and night club would basically be a rape factory - and I'm sure some people think they are - but this is just confusing a moral judgement with a legally defined standard and "skeezy" with rape.

Posted on 27 March 2024, 07:32 by: taketorikaguya

i love rape，This is clearly and undoubtedly rape

Posted on 11 April 2024, 19:56 by: Sinijas

Why are you arguing lol you should just enjoy the Story lol
Especially the great conversations lol albeit a lack of lol
in the text bubbles lol could be more lol I am deeply aroused by it lol
The party scene is very lol these guys would go to jail lol needs more lol

Lol

Posted on 25 May 2024, 00:11 by: RaithSienar

The instance at the party is definitely arguable as to whether it's rape or not though I'm erring on the side of it not being rape, but I also think people are misinterpreting her as being particularly slutty. She's shown to enjoy the sex a lot sure, but it also says in the first page of the drinking party that her "friend" who is clearly another girl had to lie to her and tell her it'd just be the two of them to get her to come over. After that when she goes to that guys house, she says she's there to pick something of hers up and even tries to avoid going inside cause she clearly knows she's going to get pressured into sex.

Getting pressured into sex when both parties are sober and under no threat of any form of reprisal isn't and never will be considered rape though, no matter how unhappy one person might be with it after the fact.

However, it seems like she might be on the track for making decisions she's more happy with though, I hope this continues and keeps getting translated and compiled, I'd really like some wholesome bro/sis love but I'd also be down for her continuing her path to being a loose girl making bad decisions. NTR and all that shit doesn't really affect me, good art is good art and this art is great.

Posted on 08 June 2024, 07:00 by: Cinereus

Holy shit some of you people are disgusting. I hope you're never left alone with drunk women. I also hope that you never have to suffer being drunk and raped.

It shouldn't make me a commie leftist to say that drunk people can't make good judgements, and that was represented accurately here. Other chapters she was just too weak, but the first chapter was rape.

She was put into a situation she wasn't prepared for by her "friend," and she is too weak-willed to say no to peer pressure and drunk her self unconscious. To say she has any autonomy in this situation is abhorrent and I say again that I hope you are never a victim of that situation.

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Posted on 16 June 2024, 01:53 by: Fuckhat

I was once "raped" by a female friend when I was near black-out drunk and she was still sober.
I didn't really give a shit but made sure to rub it in when she apologized for not asking for consent the next day. (she's a huge feminist)

Posted on 16 June 2024, 23:03 by: Superluccix

People saying this is rape are out of their minds. She voluntarily leaves to go to this group of people she clearly knows what shes going into. She never at any point in time says no or wants to leave. You can say "She was pressured" all you want. But until you say no, that you cannot by any measure say it was against your will. She gets drunk, knowing they want to have sex with her. Having drunk sex isnt illegal anywhere nor should it be because that would be ridiculous. 2 sides drink, engage in sex, then 1 side after the fact really regrets their decision so then they can retroactively decide it was rape?

No. You either say no and leave to prove you wont want to be there, or stay and engage in the actions you clearly know you're about to engage in. Stop acting like she is a victim. She has agency, she just chose not to engage in it.

Posted on 17 June 2024, 03:02 by: doublefisted88

Being pressured into sex is 100% rape you absolute troglydite, and alcohol by itself is the number one date/rape drug. If you're actually mentally impaired enough to think the only way to retract consent is actively saying the word "no" you are a garbage human being who needs to stay in whatever disgusting hole you've chosen to sequester yourself in far from the rest of decent society until you expire naturally. Forget touching grass, the sheer stench of your disgusting continence would turn the land barren the moment you made any attempt. There is no rehabilitation for someone so terminally incapable of understanding basic human expression much less something as complex as empathy. Thank fuck this is fiction, it's my sincere hope that you never serve as a juror in any criminal trial. God smite you and anyone who would attempt to make such an event a reality.

Posted on 12 July 2024, 11:46 by: goweollllll

还以为是纯爱

Posted on 28 July 2024, 04:23 by: Superluccix

No its not you simpanzee. Anybody can be *pressured* into anything. It doesnt magically make it a violation of consent when you never actually refuse when you have multiple times to do so. She was never impaired to the degree she couldnt have said no. She was understanding what other people were telling her to do, she clearly had the mental faculty needed to refuse if she wanted to, but voluntarily chose not too. The boys took alcohol too. So if anything they either *raped* each other, or consented to each other, which means neither side did anything wrong to each other. If you actually simp for these girls who just refuse to say no, then just have regrets later to retroactively change what happened, then fuck off. God I hope you never are the judge of any case. Auto believe anything the female says regardless if reality says otherwise

Posted on 06 August 2024, 19:08 by: Nobaz

The number of people here who think that being pressured or coerced into something is consent, is wild.

Posted on 07 August 2024, 08:15 by: TheRoadToGreece

Just had to hop in and add to this. Drunken coerced sex can indeed be considered a form of rape. And I’m shocked at how many idiots here think it isn’t or that it’s worth arguing about. Any sexual encounter that is unwanted or entered into reluctantly is a form of sexual harassment at minimum. You can cope all you want about whether it doesn’t count but it’s the argumentative equivalent of saying “nuh uh” on the playground when you were five and makes you look like the kind of guy who’s only had sex by getting girls drunk and pressuring them into lying down with your dumb ass.

Now let’s be clear. Rape is super sexy in porn and we all like it because it’s taboo and racey. It’s all fun and games so long as it’s pure fantasy. Obviously any of this shit happens IRL it’s pathetic and disgusting and downright evil. Again that’s why we’re interested in it in fictional settings because it’s something we’d never do in the real world. (Like incest! Ooh, topical! Look at that.)

It has been really funny read the back and forth but I’m also really happy all the “this is totally not rape” comments have been downvoted to hell. Fucking based.

Posted on 12 August 2024, 03:52 by: Cinereus

Agreed with TheRoadToGreece. The most ironic thing is that I love that first chapter, it was insanely hot for me personally. But fuck you if you'll ever put someone in that position and justify yourself afterwards. This is fantasy and it should only be acted out with plans, safewords, and prior consent. That is, if it is ever to be played out in real life. Anything less makes you subhuman trash.

Posted on 06 October 2024, 22:05 by: magenta magenta

She is grinding on the guys dick, moaning and later telling them to go harder. Rape in 2024, i guess.

Posted on 07 October 2024, 11:30 by: BuyVelomobiles

The full serialization comes out and the author finally expands on why she's always so uncomfortable: The first time they were pressuring her to drink, which she doesn't like (here they even say she didn't drink the last time they had the drinking party/gangbang, which is what the "apology booze" is: Her making it up to them), and the second time, she's just there to pick up something she forgot, but the guy's like "Show bobs and vagene?", and she agrees.

P.S.: The author outright says it's not rape on Fanbox now because people are still misunderstanding.

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Posted on 16 October 2024, 19:19 by: Cinereus

"The author said it's not rape when a woman is tricked into a party, surrounded by men and coerced into drinking and getting naked.

No, I would definitely never molest women in real life, I definitely respect women, why do you ask? I just insist that if this happened IRL it isn't rape."
Fuck off, you're scum if you think this acceptable. Get help and talk to women and listen to their experiences.

Anyways I checked the fanbox and you're straight up lying. The author says they wanted to draw their own "sexual tendencies" and that's why it's a very dark story.
They say she was originally meant to be sleep raped, and that the fanbox version (this one) is one where she is at least sexually exploited.
I am taking it with a grain of salt, MTL isn't perfect or really good, but I'd be surprised for any JP readers to prove me wrong in saying the author didn't intend for this to be rape. Please, tell me there's a different interpretation of 睡眠○姦 that makes sense in this context.
https://files.catbox.moe/1q4nxu.jpeg
https://files.catbox.moe/ss6h91.jpeg

Post I'm referencing:
https://egakinuma.fanbox.cc/posts/8666967

Posted on 22 November 2024, 14:01 by: BuyVelomobiles

@Cinereus, my brother in Christ:

↓更新時期 2023/11 以降のもの↓
□Twitter版×ファンボックス版
陵辱if ×
二次創作 ×
ファンボックスも本編 ⚪︎

↓Updated after November 2023↓
□Twitter version × Fanbox version
Rape if ×
Fanfiction ×
Fanbox is also the main story ⚪︎

She literally spends the entire post telling us that rape was what got her first work nuked, and that she had to make tamer, consensual porn to get the ban reversed. You just want to turn a page or two where she looks uncomfortable drinking into rape. I repeat: The Rape was what got her first work nuked. She had to rework the story to stay within TOS. The " darker themes " that were being " hinted " at were the fanbox segments where it turns out she's not an unfortunate victim, but an active, enthusiastic participant in her situation, and it's far worse than you imagine (involving regular casual sex with multiple partners at once). This was known from the very beginning. The only new information was exactly why FMC was always so uncomfortable, since Egaki is bad at telling stories.

You don't have to like the story, but there's no need to warp the story in your mind to make it something it isn't. She's a slut. Those are her sex friends. This isn't a guess on my part, it's literally stated in the story, and subsequent clarifications by the author; The main serialization itself, which is a SFW expansion of this story, clarifies that she's uncomfortable because she's not a drinker, and that she only wanted to pick up her belongings before being propositioned.

Yes, a woman being used for sex isn't good, even if she consents. The story itself knows this, and the premise is to " fix " her. It's weird you think your understanding of the situation, having used nothing but Google Translate, is somehow better than my own (The translator), given you're apparently literally incapable of comprehending written English, much less written Japanese.

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Posted on 02 December 2024, 05:07 by: Cinereus

I'm just gonna refer back to TheRoadToGreece again. We all like rape and gyaru sluts. That's why we're here.

But it is incredibly revealing that you have managed to convince yourself that these panels don't contain rape because the artist has drawn more. I saw those images you mentioned, I was interested specifically because I like CNC.I respect your work as a TLer, you are doing right by bridging the gap between languages. But that doesn't exempt the author from criticism and certainly not you. The TLs are good, but you are absolutely wrong to say that this isn't rape because she is a slut. It is actually a sadly uncommon phenomenon for SA victims to become hypersexual nymphomaniacs, and intentionally try to get raped like Mrs Sculptham in Moral Orel. I wouldn't say thay's exactly what's being represented here, but I make the point to say that someone can give consent during the act, but that doesn't make the actions leading up to sex any less rape.

I trust your TL, nobody is disputing that here, but the author saying it isn't rape is a frankly weak piece of evidence to support your point. Refer to death of the author.

Posted on 09 December 2024, 03:14 by: BuyVelomobiles

Frankly, if you see the story, see her consent at every step of the way, find out that this is a regular thing, that she's under no threat, reject context from the expanded story, the words of the author, and the translator, all to insist that this is rape and try to justify it with "Death of the author" (I.e. "I can replace the narrative with my own bullshit"), you're immune to facts. The Communist prudes that run the payment processors don't think this is rape, and yet here you are trying to convince the world it is anyway.

I'm done checking in on this comments section from now on. If you want to triple down on your retarded take, you can go ahead and message me on Discord. My name is right in the opening credit.

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[Egaki Numa] Namaiki na Gal Ane o Ore no Houhou de Wakaraseru Koto ni Shita Hi 1-5 | The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way Ch. 1-5 [English] [Ongoing]

[江垣沼] 生意気なギャル姉を俺の方法で解らせることにした日1-5 [英訳] [進行中]