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these are the first few pages of chapter 3 of my Story Forbidden Fruits. Enjoy!

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if you want to get paid you should consider no dragging the thing out and put a sex scene or 2 this thing is 40+ pages 3 chapters in and there isn't a single women geting fked and you are posting it in a place where one can instantly find these thing at a blink of an eye.

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Hey,
thanks for the feedback ;). Yeah, I know that my stories rather gradually rise in tention than get right to it, so it takes some time to get to the explicit interactions and I´m aware that for some it takes too long while others like the rather slow approach. That is why it is unfortunately not possible to make it right for everyone, so the one who like the "slow" approach can enjoy every bit of the story while the ones who like the more explicit content may wait for the later chapters where it will come and where there will be a lot of it :).

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Bonjour , est ce qu'il y aura une traduction en Français ?
Merci pour l'histoire même si elle est un peu lente ;)

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@zabam

OH WHAT A SUPRISE!

YET ANOTHER 'ARTIST' UPLOADING JUST ENOUGH TO TEASE.....

WELL IF THAT ALL THERE IS ON HERE BOLLOX TO IT!

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@zabam

I for one appreciate the character work. Mostly. It has been more than 250 pages of set-up. If you're still not ready for the pay off, maybe a bit of detail in a fantasy or dream sequence could serve as an amuse bouche. In many ways

But overall this is the kind of thing I like, you're doing very well. If you have a vision, enact it to the best of your ability. If you can't please everyone, you may as well please yourself, eh?

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@ Kalmeena
Bonjour, une traduction en français n'est actuellement pas prévue. Mais merci pour le feedback et j'espère que tu pourras continuer à bien comprendre en anglais.
Hello, a translation into French is currently not planned. But thanks for the feedback and I hope you can still understand it well in English.

@Daremo Shiranai Hey, thank you for the feedback and yeah good point with the dream sequences. In hindsight I also think that I could have sped up the progression a bit more than it has been so far and will for the following chapters, so that dream sequences will be less needed since it will happen for real. Unfortunately how I approach this is somewhat trial and error, since this is the first story I´ve ever written and additionally I still have A LOT to learn regarding 3D Modeling. So yeah, I learn a lot along the way and will look to improve for further chapters and other stories in the future ;)

@ cyberfish78 Hey, I understand the frustration as of now, but give it some time and we will get to the stuff which goes way beyond teasing and if you want to stick around until then I´m happy but if not thats completly fine. There are many different works from other awesome 3D Artists here that are worth whatching ;).

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Damn, I love these character designs. The girls are really hot/cute in their own way (page 38 is *chef's kiss*), but I want to praise Cedric's look the most. He's not a boringly handsome guy, but he's not hideously ugly either. Just weird enough to be relatable without grossing people out. It also helps that he's just a genuinely nice bro.

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@Revolvus
I´m happy to hear that you like the charackters. Especially that Ced in your eyes exactly achieved what he was intended to be ;). I hope you keep enjoying the story going forward ;).

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