Hi, everyone! I worked really hard on this translation, but the original author, Turisasu, worked WAY harder! Please go support them and their circle, おでんオーガン (Oden Ohgan), if you can!

Buy their works here! (The top link is in English.)
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/circle/profile/=/maker_id/RG57953.html/?locale=en_US
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/list/=/article=maker/id=202618/

Support Turisasu here!
https://turisasu.fanbox.cc/
https://twitter.com/Turi_sasu
pixiv.me/turisasu

Good effort, just a note on the support thing since I've also started including it as of late.
You should add the links to your credit page.
That way, when it inevitably gets scraped to the other sites, you at least have a call to action there and make it easy for people to give the author money.

My side note is to avoid typesetting vertically pretty much always.

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Don't put punctuation on their own line, especially if there is room for it in the bubble. Same goes with vertical text in a bubble (you can shorten the space between letters or use a smaller font). Japanese text also over uses punctuation, you don't need to match it one to one (especially the tildes and ellipses into other punctuation.). Also if you can translating sfx that are in bubbles is always appreciated (as well as the other sfx, but I don't know how good you are at redrawing, I'm not comparing this next to the raws.) On page 16, if you are going to do verticle text, dont due partial horizontal text, it looks strange. Also you have a line with a pause (S-), a space, then the continuation, I'm assuming thats a typo, that space is not necessary. Pg 22 one of the bubbles text is not centered in the bubble. Same with page 25. I would suggest getting a person to do some QC before you post so you don't have to go back and fix things (and please do fix things if someone points them out.). Text shaping overall could use some work but the translation seems fine (again, not comparing to the original.). If someone like cutegyaru comes along and takes a look they will be more thorough in suggestions.

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More self-cest would be nice! But nice plot!!!!

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If I were blown by a hot nurse, I would not complain about it.

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thankyou for the hardwork and translation.
finally another nurse that got possessed, damn hot

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Genuinely curious. Is this AI? Or AI assisted in some way? The details for the background and shading seem really bad on some pages.

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“I’m going to get addicted to this!” She says for the second time as she unhesitatingly goes down on the fourth individual on-screen cock within a month.

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Wait, so the dead guy never actually possessed the nurse' body? The doctor just gave the nurse a different personality or like a split-personality?
that... actually makes more sense than actual body possession.

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Thank you so much @Kyuume! For some dumb reason I didn't even consider that it would be ripped and put up other places...
I added the links to the post because I thought they'd be easier to click but it doesn't help if people on other sites don't see them!! q.q
And I'll be sure to try to avoid vertical text from now on!

And thank you so much too @ChronoStriker1 for all the great advice! I'll definitely take it all to heart!
I've already asked someone to help me QC better in the future! I was also really wondering what people might think of the amount of punctuation and the placement of it since it did seem/look a little odd to me, but I wanted to try to stay true to the original. Now I know for the future that some changes are okay if it helps with the overall translation. And I'll do my best to translate the SFX too! I didn't know Photoshop at all 2 weeks ago, so they were intimidating, but now I might be able to do some of them. After I go through and make changes I'll post an updated version! After I figure out how to on this site... (^ - ^;)7

@composer12 OH NO! When I first started this project I used an AI to remove most of the text from the bubbles because I thought it would save me busy work, but I don't want to do that if it degrades the actual art!
Can you tell me some pages where it's really bad so I have a reference of what to look for? I'll try looking myself too, but clearly my eye for art isn't so great yet...

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@Hellfire-Dragon You shouldnt need ai to clean the bubbles at all, if you are using photoshop there are actions available so you can select the white part of the bubble with the magic wand tool (holding select to select multiple at once), and will create a layer with the bubbles filled. Its the bubble filling action on this page:
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/#tools
Actually that page has a lot of good resources so you should probably check it out anyway.

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huh wait, so who is actually who? who did he inject that to her sister?

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A nice story of the plan of the old doctor to avoid death, although it seems too much complex, as he did not take into account how the possession drug would affect the main protagonist -as the nurse became a sex slut -.

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@-Hellfire-Dragon I don't think it's your use of AI that messed up the art. I looked at the other translations and the Japanese version posted on this site and they seem to have the same problems as this one. If you're curious on what I noticed however...

Pg4. The outline for the doorways are messy. The hand on the last panel is shaded in a way that doesn't make sense and looks bad.

Pg5. Same problem with messy outlines for doors and windows. Also random lines on the floor and some lines going into the floor and messing up the perspective.

Pg6. Shading of the hands is really weird and nonsensical. For some reason, her forearm is shaded but her hand is not. The bottom panel has her entire hand except her thumb and finger tips shaded. Also there are like 5 or 6 different crosshatching styles used at once.

I could keep going but it's pretty much the same issues throughout the whole thing. Background objects have low res outlines, the shading is consistently off, and there are too many different crosshatching styles used at random. Looking at it closely, it looks like someone ran the whole thing through some kind of AI "manga" filter. It makes everything look kinda off. Maybe I could ignore it if it was just bad backgrounds, but the shading is really distracting.

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Thank you @Chronostriker1 for the helpful info! Even if the AI didn't mess up anything this time, I feel like it's better for me to do things myself in the future.
I'll read over the resources that you linked and keep learning more about Photoshop! It seems it's a very powerful program!

And thank you @composer12! I'm glad I didn't accidentally hurt the original work. I can definitely see what you mean now that you've pointed it out. You have a really good eye for detail!
I wonder if maybe one day my skills will reach the point where I could fix such things, but for now I think I'll have to surrender to strange shading. (^w^;)7

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This is pretty decent, but what on earth does "Men also have mouths" mean? lol

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@The Goat is Watching
I think the intent there was: "This isn't me succumbing to femininity or admitting that I'm a woman now. This action is okay to do because a man could also do it."

Hey, this might sound dumb but, how exactly does updating a gallery work on this website? I see lots of on-going galleries that seem to update 1 or 2 images at a time, but I don't really want to do that. I'll try to finish all my edits first and just re-upload them all, but do I need to delete this gallery at that time? I still have a ways to go, so it's not urgent, but I'm just curious about the proper process.

Last edited on 04 February 2024, 01:38.

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What the fuck did I just read?
And that guy suddenly became a whore

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Nice plot for once.

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@composer12 it struck me as odd, the artist has some pretty decent older works but theres a point in his gallery it feels like the art style changed a bit that kinda looks ai.

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