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Almost perfect work on the typesetting, but when enlarging or transforming fonts make sure to enlarge the base font pixel size so that it is appropriately sharp.
I assume that's why the upper left text of 2_004.jpg is blurry, for example.
Whoever did the translation did a great job as well.

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Hot AF. This is my jam.

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@vfjTgw my man some words are lettering xd, not fonts

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2_015.jpg , she's supposed to be burping, not moaning
2_014.jpg, "I'm gooning" is a poor translation because gooning is masturbating for a long time without ejaculating, which she's clearly not even capable of doing.
I'd also say trying to spice up the language of the translation and not sound too "accurate/plain" can sometimes work against the point of a scene. When reacting to the cock on 2_007.jp, "nani... kore...?" and "nande ochinchin ga haeteruno...!?" sound like shock and panic. "What on earth is this...?" and "Who could have thought I'd grow a dick!?" sounds way more relaxed, more suprised than shocked.

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I don't know why it feels like it could be better, I guess it is likely just that it feels disconnected and not really part of a story, like an anthology rather than a series.

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Ngl, gooning and gooming takes the sexiness and just goes straight to funny ahh dialogue.

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10/10 idea, mid execution

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The goon/goom stuff just makes this translation feel like a joke, because you know it was only added to fit in with the current time frame's meme words like "goonbait", "gock", or the explosion of plap phrases.

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Insanely hot as an idea, although I too question some of the translation choices.

I still liked it and would enjoy a sequel if it ever happens. The "moral degeneration" type stuff is really fun for me. Especially if the person is just given a little push and then does the rest on their own. And even moreso if they're a girl with a dick they didn't always have :p
I do agree that if the different people interacted more with each other it'd be hotter still.

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Typesetting (or whatever it's called) is phenomenal.
I'm pro "goon" but anti "goom". The latter is a bit too silly without some other goon glossolalia (think "oo ee oo ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang").
IMHO defining gooning as a long edging session is overly restrictive; I think gooning as monomaniacal masturbation fits great here.

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