Rough grammar. Fucking hell, it seems like the JP text was translated too literally.
p3 make a child with me?; So it's quick but will you... (WTF does that mean) p4. ...erect your penis, right? (Sorry, opposite of that on my end.) p5 while holding the tip...; suck politely; this is a penis that has grown p6 What to do now? you might like this; ...drips sweat and clear juice (literally water, then?) p6 (internal monologue) I want you to feel comfortable serving me (so while you suck someone off is somehow serving themselves. NEXT!) p7 (internal monologue) at this step; This hit feels good; penis is amazing (the male's name is Penis); p8 I'm ready for my body; Can you get wet and have sex?; Masturbate yourself before calling you? (Fucking nonsense)
etc etc. One more...
p14 My husband's penis <3 I'm strong today too; hot <3 wasteful <3; Have a lot of sex today
LWND. Please stop translating, if this is what you call a "translation". Go back to ESL school.
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