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Taken from DLSite: https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01151146.html

Credit for translation belongs to Solid Rose

Out of nowhere the story went off the rails the last few pages. There was no build-up to what happened at the end. It's like the artist wanted to do a vanilla story originally, but then decided with a coin flip that he would introduce an ugly bastard and cuck the boyfriend.

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@Forgunia Right?Like what the fuck, nobody will like this, people who like vanilla will hate the ending and people who like NTR will hate it aswell because there's no scene of it at all,like this has to be one of the worst takes of all time.

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This looks like the prequel of a NTR doujin that would normally be released after said NTR doujin.

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"Im a sex slave btw" Shocking revalation. M night shyamalan would be proud of this work.

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PART 2 RAW:/g/2760901/8409f76fd6/

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Looks like chapter 2 is an apology from the author. Heavily implied MC's neighbor killed the oldman and ran away.

Anyway, MC ended up with a cute gyaru wife. He won.

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Wait, was there mind control somewhere in this?

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Used his NTRman powers to defeat cancer?

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@Z4turn, you are right about that. As someone who reads both vanilla and NTR manga, I am unable to like the way the author handled it. It's clear as day that the person behind this work needs to perfect their craft before they can even think about getting their work published in an official magazine. I'd imagine that an editor would fly of the handle if a mangaka were to hand over such a plot to them.

Last edited on 07 March 2024, 13:05.

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Fat ugly bastard evolved to Fat ugly cancerous bastard!

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