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And also, rsx205 and cutegyaru can put their "rough translation" tag in their asses.

Very wholesome

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Of all the--

How is Bocchi the sex-starved beast in this one?

10/10

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@GeneralSky Introverts do be like that

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The best Hitori × Nijika H dōjin, for sure!!! 😍

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003
OG: へへっ行儀悪いかな
TL: "It's so delicious"
ED: rewritten line, she's not talking about the food at all

OG: これも２人でお出かけ出来るようになって知ったコト
TL: "I've been enjoying this[sic] kind of moments since we are able to go out together."
ED: this line is rewritten. she's not talking about enjoying anything as a result of going out together

005
OG: 相変わらず心臓に悪い
TL: "...H-hey, that make my heart race..."
ED: this whole line is off the mark, she's comparing previous experiences

OG: 黄藤だよ
TL: "...This one is yellow"
ED: she's not describing colors

OG: 綺麗なピンク色だぁ
TL: "...And that one has a beautiful pink color"
ED: this line isn't a continuation

006
OG: ねー
TL: "Really?"
ED: she is agreeing

008
OG: あの…さ
TL: "Um...yes."
ED: this is not agreement with anything

OG: はい
TL: "Yes."
ED: this is interrogative

010
OG: ――いつもあたしの家じゃん？
TL: "But what about my house?"
ED: missing first part of line and wrong speaker

OG: あっはっはいっ？
TL: "Why don't we go there!?"
ED: made up line, she's stuttering

OG: ぼっちちゃんの家はご家族いるし
TL: "But Bocchi-chan's family is there..."
ED: this is incorrect as it's not a response to the previous (rewritten) bubble

OG: お互い高校生だとホテルは早い気がしたし…だからたまには思いっきりシたくてさ
TL: "Yes, but we're both students so a hotel feels...too soon..."
ED: wrong speaker but also she's not talking about it being too soon

OG: たまには思いっきり
TL: "But this time, I just really"
ED: she's not just talking about this time

014
OG: わ、わぁ
TL: "Yeah..."
ED: this is cry of surprise

023
OG: もの凄く
TL: "Amazing..."
ED: this is an adverb

etc

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