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herio goated as usual

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You forgot your white stroke on page 23

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I guess it’s good that this finally got a TL for the sake of closure (thank you!), but I think this might be my least favorite among Herio’s stories. It’s not even adequately bittersweet; it just feels kind of awkward and unsatisfying to me, like their relationships just ended up worse than they were at the start.

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Here's some mistakes.
Page 9 "I knew it // we're a perfect match"
Should be connected to his previous line. "After all, we're such a perfect match."

Page 19 "How tight is your pussy // like never before"
broken grammar

Page 21 "so you're saying // you pretty chill today?
He's talking about using the condom, should be something like "Is it safe today?"

Page 21 "No... // I feel like going crazy"
She's replying to him "No, it's dangerous/not safe"

Page 21 "So we feel the same"
He's replying again "Then it's a no-go anyway"

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@ozuuma123 thanks for your feedback, I've fixed up all those issues

Base +10, electrocardia +8, LordBlubberNuggets +6, DJ_Puchuu +16

Huh, this honestly turned out to be rather disappointing.

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Insanely disappointing ending

Base +7, Palaxius +29, fuckmewitharake +7, Obsket +9, LordBlubberNuggets +6, GFTYLR +6, wootwoot123 +6, jere512 +6

I honestly like the ending. Relationships are messy! People make bad decisions! Kind of feels more realistic that Manimi is caught between wanting a relationship and not wanting to hurt her best friend.

Last edited on 04 March 2024, 19:00.

Base +6, DJ_Puchuu +16, Almanik -17, Amaduyu Mitsumi +26, fuckmewitharake -7, KamizakiP +6, trulvir +6, biscardone +8

this reads more like a mainstream dumpster fire rather than a conventional thinbook. probably needs a few more chapters to flesh out the story properly

Base +6, Menasws +4, GFTYLR +6, wootwoot123 +6, biscardone -8

If I wanted realism I wouldnt' be reading hentai wtf do these fucks think they are shakespear or someshit? Go write an actual book if you want to do commentary on real life.

Base +6, jere512 +6, biscardone -8

I like the ending, but this needed an additional chapter or two. As things stand, we don't understand why Manami hesitates to go out with Ren. Maybe an additional chapter showing Rio and Manami's relationship would be helpful. Or maybe talk about Rio's feelings a little bit more? Rio's full-page spread in the 2nd chapter was BEAUTIFUL, but the entire love triangle thing is completely underutilized. The ending could have landed a lot better.

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