(Motenaishi Sokubaikai Suru 9) [Sutoraiyasan (Sutorai)] Yume no Naka nara Nani shite mo Ii yo ne | You can do anything in a dream, right? (Watashi ga Motenai no wa Dou Kangaetemo Omaera ga Warui!) [English] [Scansvita Works]
there's a significant amount of rewritten lines in the few pages I read
004 OG: あぅっ TL: "It's hot..." ED: this is a moan
OG: ひッ♡あっ…!♡ TL: "I-it hurts...!♡" ED: these are moans
OG: くっ、 TL: "Oh," ED: this is a moan. and wrong speaker
OG: ふ…♡ TL: "Fufu...♡" ED: this is breathing
OG: ちゅっぷ TL: "Agh" ED: this is not a moan
OG: ちゅっぷ TL: "N-no" ED: this is not even speech
OG: ちゅっぷ TL: "S-stop" ED: this is not even speech
OG: ちゅっぷ TL: "Ahh" ED: this is not a moan
005 OG: なで♡なで♡ TL: "Plot" ED: nonsensical TL
OG: もうねよ? TL: N/A
006 OG: ねてるな TL: N/A
OG: なんかちょっと新鮮かも TL: "Somehow, this feels a bit cool." ED: she's not saying it feels cool
007 OG: 夜這いって言うのがフェアじゃない気もするけど TL: "Although sneaking in during the night doesn't seem fair" ED: she's not saying it seems unfair, she's trying to justify herself
OG: 女神か TL: N/A
008 OG: 智ちゃんが淫魔になって私を食べにきたんだ... TL: "Tomo-chan has become an incubus and has come to devour me..." ED: not an incubus
OG: 力つよ…!! TL: "Ahh...!!" ED: this is not a moan
OG: かわいい TL: N/A
OG: 本当はもっともっと智ちゃんのこと滅茶苦茶にいじめてあげたい TL: "I really want to bully Tomo-chan more and more"
OG: だけど万が一にも智ちゃんを傷つけたくないから TL: "But I don't want to hurt Tomo-chan in any way"
009 OG: 手…はなして TL: "It's...it's me." ED: made up line, this is an imperative
010 OG: 寝る前のそれとは全然違う TL: "This is completely different than just going to bed" ED: she isn't comparing it to sleeping
etc
Base +38, VITA135 -3, Megaton +45, atomicfuthum +8, ZIGMA44 +25