https://www.fudeors.net/store/books/doujinshi/watching-over-the-poor-bitch/

that page 59 is painful and perfectly accurate. first thing out of her mouth is she needs his money. afterwards she keeps having sex with the guy who beat him up. i don't get why the author made him stay in this relationship he should've told her to fuck off and die after page 59.

Base +9, star_fox +6, nemuro +6, bananaramadama-sama +7, Fofotron +15, elefat224 +7, likeyouknowwhatever +6, as102 +13, KrizalidTR +14, ShinKagami +8, Vivi1993 +22, Rivfader89 +8, crazyness888 +8, and 20 more...

@notdapooper I think the guy is waiting for her to get knock up and then leave her

Base +6, Fofotron +15, ademar +7, likeyouknowwhatever +6, Rivfader89 +8, Dark-wings +6, Nikita78 +24, Ammendum +5, Coledas Ukgent +14, anonymousMember +6, rotar zairo +10, Davaku +6, Iambob1 +6, and 7 more...

"this app is gross and indecent, maybe I should install it"

Base +59, Sandman_2806 +6, AuthlimOfXvim +6, bananaramadama-sama +7, JackRyan86273751 +5, elefat224 +7, g0su +14, velocity606 +7, Vivi1993 +22, Ch3n9 +7, moximoore +15, Nikita78 +24, Ammendum +5, and 12 more...

@notdapooper
He's just gathering material proof of her cheating so once she brings up pregnancy he can bail out, his relationship is as well as over, and as she said he won't have sex with her so she is out of alibis.

Base +20, AuthlimOfXvim +6, bananaramadama-sama +7, Fofotron +15, JackRyan86273751 +5, likeyouknowwhatever +6, velocity606 +7, as102 +13, Azura Meta +6, ZeBolt +7, Omnicent +6, Iambob1 +6, PinguPrin +7, and 15 more...

what a cliffhanger, what next 🤔

Base +4, ashkar -7, TenRX -7, kealuox -7, Davaku -6, ADIN0 +6

Say what you want about the guy that got cheated on, but at least he's prepared to move on unlike so many other MCs in this genre. Sure, it's true that he doesn't break up with her immediately, but the ending makes it clear that he's so done with her and is just waiting for the moment he has got enough evidence to pull the rug underneath her.

Base +14, Fofotron +15, elefat224 +7, likeyouknowwhatever +6, velocity606 +7, Azura Meta +6, Sry4That +6, Rivfader89 +8, nightmare_101 +7, Iambob1 +6, PinguPrin +7, Fairsche +5, Nikita78 +24, and 16 more...

I was comparing the translation with the previous one /g/1787890/0fbddb75b9/
On page 59 on the second from bottom leftmost panel the shouting textbox here seems to be somehow the guy shouting at the girl, which is weird because of paneling and such. Looking at the previous translation and the RAW, it seems to be somebody off-panel shouting at them.

Last edited on 04 March 2024, 18:44.

Base +8, Nikita78 +24, Coledas Ukgent +14, Davaku +6, 58569 +7, ADIN0 +6, minnazzo +14

Jou must be shooting blanks if he's been busting inside her this much and hasn't knocked her up yet, lol.

Really do like Keiichi's plan of ditching her when she finally gets pregnant. Wouldn't mind more endings like this where the cheated-on doesn't sit in a corner crying while masturbating.

Base +6, Nikita78 +24, likeyouknowwhatever +6, Coledas Ukgent +14, Fofotron +15, rotar zairo +10, Davaku +6, 58569 +7, palotz +6, x182 +7, ADIN0 +6, Vormik +7, minnazzo +14

NTR antagonists are like my nose when I have a cold. Blowing out a huge load of sticky white stuff every 10-15 minutes all day and sometimes even through the night.

Base +7, Nikita78 +24, Coledas Ukgent +14, Fofotron +15, rotar zairo +10, Davaku +6, BallsDeepu +6, 58569 +7, x182 +7, ADIN0 +6, Vormik +7, minnazzo +14, venfare +9, and 1 more...

Amazing, an NTR that's somewhat exaggeration of realistic situation, with MC taking the L in a smart way, knowing that once cheated it's not easy to avoid the second. Overall, this is one of the few NTR manga which left me satisfied. Hopefully MC will find his true love, since he might be weak but he is not dumb.

Base +6, Fofotron +15, ADIN0 +6, Vormik +7, minnazzo +14

Typical NTR antagonist usually never make me mad since they are samey. This one is really fucking annoying ngl. So scummy, narcisist, and many more. Man...the author really good at making me hating an fictional character this lot. The sex scene wasn't enough (barebone, i dare to say) to relief my dislike for that jerkou.

Base +10, Fofotron +15, ADIN0 +6, Vormik +7, venfare +9

I can't understand what the fuck MC is waiting for, they are not even married and he will never fuck her or utilize her.

Base +4, K81f +6, ADIN0 +6, Vormik -7

Very accurate, the girls are this way on the real life... This bring me memories about my ex

Base +7, ComplexSavior +6, ADIN0 +6, Vormik +7, minnazzo +14

This MC is still a cuck until he actually leaves her. he don't need her. They barely have any intimate time. This why I just don't get the appeal of NTR-focued hentai. YOU ARE NOT THE BULL RUTTING HER! The protagonist or focal point is usually the one getting NTR'd. He's usually oblivious, in denial, a loser or ends up accepting it and allow it to continue. That last one, by the way, the girl doesn't even care if the guy is accepting it or not. She's just hungry for the other cock(s) she would be taking. Defenders or fans of it are always in denial of these points and just go "herp-a-derp-derp the art is good bro" and there's good hentai artist that don't have NTR as their main focus.

Base +1, chaqueta_pajilla -6

/g/2847608/cce2fdff55/
Why does the doujinshi have two English translations and different versions of the sentence?

Base +6