Fixed Pages 3.6.8.9.10 and 12 Thank You... help is always welcome.
for the next capter i will write up a transcript first,
istead of translating and redrawing in one go.
If anyone has a god font in mind please tell.

I`m already happy that i did not use Arial...

Some spelling mistakes:
Fixed, thanks.

Thanks for spending over 8 hours for this!
Oh and maybe use another font? Points and commas look almost the same.

Best regards, another bored German. Gute Nacht! ;)

Edit: "for the next capter i will write up a transcript first,"
That's a good idea! Not sure about fonts. Maybe try https://forums.ehentaihip.cc/index.php?showforum=81 (there is also a "The Font Thread")

Last edited on 11 March 2024, 14:05.

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Fixed Pages 3.6.8.9.10 and 12 Thank You... help is always welcome.
for the next capter i will write up a transcript first,
istead of translating and redrawing in one go.
If anyone has a god font in mind please tell.

I`m already happy that i did not use Arial...

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thank you and well that's what i call good translator not like some shit using Ai/manual-google-translate

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Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.

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002
OG: ９時からの会議には間に合うから…
TL: "I will be at the meeting at 9. The files should have already arrived..."
ED: this is rewritten to avoid the issue of timing and adding assumed context about files

OG: ちゃんと持ってよ
TL: "I already bought it."
ED: she's not talking about purchasing anything

OG: はいじゃあ改札口でね
TL: "...Alright I am about to board the train"
ED: she isn't talking about boarding

003
OG: 大切な書類を忘れたから会社に届けてくれなんて…
TL: "He actually forgot his documents at home, and asked me to bring them to him at his workplace..."
ED: missing 大切

004
OG: キャア！
TL: "Careful!"
ED: made up text

005
OG: 私も結婚するまでは毎朝この状態だったなぁ
TL: "Before I got married, I was in her position every morning"
ED: she's not talking about the other woman's position

006
OG: 偶然…？
TL: "A molester?..."
ED: she doesn't mention molestation at all

OG: やだっ
TL: "Disgusting"
ED: she doesn't call it disgusting

OG: 間違いない…痴漢だ…
TL: "It's really...a molester..."
ED: she's correcting her earlier thought

007
OG: でも…この子真面目そうだし…
TL: "Is he serious!?"
ED: she's commenting on his appearance

008
OG: なんだか気持ちいい…
TL: "It always felt this good..."
ED: she's not talking about it always feeling good

OG: ううん
TL: "Mhh..."
ED: she's correcting her own thoughts

OG: ウフフ
TL: "Uuuuuuuuhuhhhh!!!"
ED: this is not a moan

OG: 学生くん…今日だけは特別よ
TL: "Just today I will let it slide"
ED: missing 学生くん

009
OG: いやぁ 今朝はごめんね
TL: "Honey, I'm so sorry for today"
ED: "honey" isn't present in the original, and he's specific about the time of day

010
OG: 今日はごめんなさい あなたが美しくてつい…明日も会えたら嬉しいです同じ時間同じ車両で待っています。
TL: "I'm really sorry for what I did today. You seemed so beautiful and couldn't help myself. I hope. We meet again. I will look for you in the same carriage every day."
ED: he gives a specific day

and so on

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i will stick to cleaning and redrawing the chapters hope someone picks it up for translation...
I thought i did somewhat ok.... but it seems AI might be passable at proofreading,
but not much more.
At least i get a bit of photoshop training.

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This is the hentai I'd like to read. Thanks.

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