Hope This one is better than the last...
took me a while, if anyone see's any mistake,
write a commend and i will try to correct it.
Enjoy.

Fixed; Thanks Waitugreat

03 is I up
Since don't have access to the japanese Raw,
i need to machine translate the chinese or korean releases.
Then sort the lines and rewrite the whole thing into somthing usable.
But as all of you can see writing isn't really my thing.

Finally, I've figured out how to get ChatGPT off its guardrails.
I hope that fixes my spelling and grammar.

Yeah, looks better than yesterday. Font is fine.

Some little mistakes I saw while clicking through the pages:
p7: shoud -> should
p10: the train packed -> the train is packed
p13, bottom right panel: "the feel of my Lady's butt" ... uh, I think it's one of the men saying this. Not that I want to assume genders. :---)

p16: "I only need too quietly" -> "I only need to be quiet"
p18: "Did just Climax?" -> Did you just climax?
p19: In the three small panels top right: personal pronoun "i" in lowercase instead of "I"
p22: middle panel: "You so wet" -> You are so wet
p22: middle panel: "your hole is desperate" ... not sure if desperate is the correct word or more "honest", kinda like "at least your hole is honest; it's sucking me in"

p22: bottom right panel: lowercase "i"
p24: "Again and again, making orgasm" -> "making me orgasm"?
p26: the e-mail: "you are forbidden do it with your husband" -> to do it
p26: lowercase "i"

Base +42, bgrim -15

very very interesting, i need more, thanks for this

Base +4, Coledas Ukgent +14

the Chinese translations don't really get any of these wrong for the record. telephone translations are already janky, but when you're not familiar with either language it gets even worse, unfortunately

002
OG: スマホを返してほしければ今から大塚井駅の東口改札に来い
TL: "If you want your phone back, come to the Otsukai Station immediately."
ED: a specific location at the station is given

OG: そ…そんな…
TL: "How...? Why are you doing this?"
ED: she is just shocked

004
OG: とにかくもう一度会ってなんとか…
TL: "I need to go there, somehow, there must be a way out..."
ED: she's not thinking about a way out

006
OG: 久しぶりにアナタと一緒に帰ろうと思って．．．
TL: "I wanted to go home with you after work..."
ED: missing her complete thought

007
OG: あれ？いないな
TL: "Hmm?"
ED: missing entire second half

OG: どっか行っちゃったみたいだね
TL: "He's not there anymore."
ED: he's making a speculative statement

009
OG: 幸恵はこんな満員電車久しぶりだろう？
TL: "The train is packed! Lucky we got in, right Yukie?"
ED: no mention of luck or fortune in the raw

010
OG: あなた…
TL: "you..."
ED: she's not saying "you"

OG: 私
TL: "Uhh"
ED: this is the beginning of her sentence

012
OG: 奥さんの尻の感触忘れられなくてよ
TL: "The shape of your butt is unforgettable."
ED: he's not talking about shape

OG: サイコーだぜこの肉
TL: "Great, so much to grap[sic]."
ED: he's not talking about the amount to "grap"

OG: あなたたち…
TL: "Stop, please..."
ED: she's not telling them to stop

OG: また触られたくなったんだろ奥さんも…
TL: "Getting turned on again because someone is touching you..."
ED: he's talking about what was compelling her

etc

Base +38

i will stick to cleaning and redrawing the chapters hope someone picks it up for translation...
I thought i did somewhat ok.... but it seems AI might be passable at proofreading,
but not much more.
At least i get a bit of photoshop training.

Base +6