https://www.pixiv.net/user/2484671/series/205483

Update Chapter 2 (p.12)

Rewrite?
interesting

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" Have you done your homework but asked to play?"

They are truly on an alien world, which explains the linguistic drift from english to whatever it is they're speaking.

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Wait the big sister is 60???

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Guess that World Orbits faster around the sun so the years are shorter. Something tells me halving that number might be an accurate result in Earth Years.

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500 year old dragon alert.

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I think the artist needs to hire a translator or a proofreader instead of trying to doing it themselves...
It flows worse than broken English t this point...

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seems like the author has used AI assist

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Rewrite? Does that mean the old story is scraped? A shame.

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