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[Melkor Mancin] The Raven

Western
Posted:2024-04-10 18:11
Parent:2863889
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Language:English  
File Size:76.81 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:1311 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.68
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Posted on 22 December 2023, 06:53 by:   nicrocon    PM
Score +25
ah... a dream
Posted on 22 December 2023, 08:15 by:   Mike-O-Shay    PM
Score +85
He fuck that raven yet or what
Posted on 22 December 2023, 08:40 by:   greengrasstree    PM
Score +26
I don't think it's a dream. Tim probably fucked Chloe when he returned to his room and blacked out. Chloe will probably appear in the next pages.
Posted on 28 December 2023, 20:38 by:   shogun83    PM
Score +18
I guess he's on another break, been two weeks with no updates
Posted on 29 December 2023, 02:16 by:   YellowFeverGT    PM
Score +18
Nah, he mentioned he moved into his new place, and the internet provider has been delaying his set up.
Posted on 22 March 2024, 01:38 by:   greengrasstree    PM
Score +26
I'm confused. When he wakes up, Chloe isn't on his bed at first ... but then she suddenly appears on it? wat EDIT: Oh, I think I understand. Starting page 22, Tim is flashing back to what happened when he entered his room; he found Chloe on his bed and I'm guessing they fucked.

Anyway, sorry for the low res pages btw. I'm not subbed to Melkor's site so I'm just pulling what I can find online
Last edited on 22 March 2024, 02:01.
Posted on 22 March 2024, 01:49 by:   gntz    PM
Score +12
threesome incoming? pls yes
Posted on 22 March 2024, 01:59 by:   Ryoga316    PM
Score +135
this is like the gazillionth time this one is uploaded. wtf is going on?
Posted on 10 April 2024, 22:29 by:   moncho5489    PM
Score +37
I want Chloe fucked by Tim
Posted on 11 April 2024, 05:16 by:   greengrasstree    PM
Score +27
Damn, guess they didn't fuck. Hopefully there'll be a comic of them doing it at some point. she only gave him a blowjob in Spades.

EDIT: lol after two months we only get one new page and the next one will be the last. no vaginal creampie, no chloe about to get fucked, and an irregular release schedule. comic was disappointing

and melkor didn't even release page 23 in high res smh, time to drop this shit artist
Last edited on 19 July 2024, 19:13.
Posted on 28 July 2024, 13:08 by:   Foostini    PM
Score +31
He's been falling off anyway, even before his ISP problems he's been getting slower and slower and his art's been super inconsistent for a while now with characters wildly changing proportions and even facial structure from panel to panel and his expression work has gone to shit, it's either him slowly moving every character to having resting sameface or when they emote it's super exaggerated and weird. And i say this as generally a pretty big fan of Melkor, just feel like the writing's on the wall.
Posted on 28 July 2024, 19:11 by:   greengrasstree    PM
Score -11
the ending is so forced and corny. pam writing tim a goodbye letter like they were having an ongoing affair even though they only banged twice in one day. if she just got post sex clarity, then why would she be dumb enough to give tim photos of herself and them fucking along with her handwritten letter when all of that is proof of her having molested a child uhhh

oh wait that's right tim's 18 even though he looks just like a middle schooler (bruh you can't read breaking in tim and tell me tim wasn't just a kid). but anyway it's still a crime for teachers to fuck students and if she's thinking it's not as big of a deal because he was already 18, why would she feel so bad about the affair? if tim's 18 then he's legal and even though he's her student, the school year is about to end and i'm guessing tim's a senior, so she could just say they started fucking after he graduated if she ever got confronted. but then again those polaroid photos are probably dated, so why she stupid enough to give out evidence of her having an illicit sexual relationship with her student

stupid ass ending smh. we all wanted tim and pam to be an ongoing thing like donald and janice and sidney and bob. this comic should have just ended with tim getting ready to fuck chloe at long last, setting up the next comic. but instead we don't get that, tim doesn't cum inside of pam's pussy, pam breaks up with him, pages take longer to come out, and 23 isn't even in high res. it'll probably take years for the tim x chloe comic to come out, too. yeah fuck this, dropping melkor for good

also melkor's art has always been mid lol for porn he's alright but he's never been great at drawing
Last edited on 05 September 2024, 18:55.
Posted on 29 July 2024, 06:29 by:   tompow    PM
Score +21
Quoth the raven "Nevermore".
Posted on 29 July 2024, 11:31 by:   john david    PM
Score +24
But, Best had already said on his Twitter that he was going to take a break from Tim's story and focus on the other characters. I thought the ending was pretty cool, I just wish there was some continuity with Chloe, but let's move on to the others

PS: sorry if there are any mistakes, my English isn't that good ^^'
Posted on 30 July 2024, 14:21 by:   Dr.Pavel    PM
Score +72
What the hell is this shit ending?
Posted on 30 July 2024, 21:31 by:   IsNaiTeR    PM
Score +33
ffs, not even for free this thing is worthing anymore
Posted on 01 August 2024, 13:19 by:   IMAGELord6666    PM
Score +0
Hopefully this means he could go back to that nurse story.
Posted on 26 August 2024, 18:00 by:   carcaliusca    PM
Score +7
page 10, lower right side, what the fuck is that face, drunken master face maybe?
Posted on 12 September 2024, 13:35 by:   nicrocon    PM
Score +16
I feel like that art half problems come from trying make Tim look like an adult and shota at the time. Him being a muscular mantlet with a 40 year old face just makes all the women look like Giantesses. You can't please both crowds and Tim's story was most popular when it was appealing to the shotacons. I don't why he can't keep a consistent face with Pam when he doesn't have that issue with anyone else. The other thing is I can't help but feel that Melkor wants to draw a regular comic. More and more the comics are devoted to art experimentation and the supernatural/family drama plot.
Posted on 27 September 2024, 10:37 by:   TheIronBird    PM
Score +12
pretty sure the (now) constant inconsistencies with proportions is because before he was tracing a lot, whereas now he's presumably started trying to get away from that crutch.

and yep, tim seemingly growing 1-2 years between every comic throws shit off completely. makes you think the whole thing is an affair taking place over years when it's apparently just been a couple days. also just a damn shame, everyone getting tempted by possessed big-dick shota tim is best tim cause it's extra depraved

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