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TL/CL/RD/QC: Myself
Edit: fixed page 9,11,12,18,21,23
If you spot any typo or other mistakes please let me know so I can fix it. Thanks!

Man, this artist is amazing, and this is a debut work? I can't wait for their next one.
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy this translation.

pg 5 Is quite funny. Hopefully the author makes a sequel.

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pg.16 the dude just doesn't have a head lmao

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p.23 "loves her big sis"
Hello there mtl. lol

Yes, at this point any translation that has mix up gender, is machine translate,
jp, china, kr do not use gender indicator "he/she" for most of the time because it base on context,
by context reader would know this is a male character so they would understand it as "he"
but machine translate only "see" the text put in (usually 1sentence) lack any context.

so machine don't know the context would slap whatever on and most of the time it become get gender swap.

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@H0R0 thanks for pointing that out, it was a honest mistake since I was tired, I apologize for that. Although it would be nice if you're not blindly accusing me of using machine translation just because there was one or two tiny mistakes I made. Have a nice day.

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thank you for the fix

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@H0R0

Dude just so scared the shit of mtl and don't know what typo is.

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@ dgjdgjdgj

lol

what? typo?

try type

his

how do you even typo "his" to "her"?

"i" is at other side of the keyboard to "e" separate by 4 keys

"s" is separate to "r" by two keys,

you cannot fat finger those key to make it typo.

typo in your head? can't different "his" to "her" so type down "her" and keep reading it as "his"? ok fine. it just mean your head is fuck, can't recognize male and female.

so i would think at this years (from 2022) people just mtl then see if there is any red ~~ under word to "fix" mtl mistake,

"loves her big sis" is not wrong in grammar so no grammar checker (not just spell checker) would flag it as wrong grammar, so this kind of "typo" would pop up all over mtl work even when those work has "QC".

So yes, at this years, any one has simple mistake as swap "his" to "her" or "her" to "his" is mtl edit mistake at release to me.

Last edited on 24 April 2024, 19:20.

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Great debut work, with a lot of potential to become a series, if so perhaps we could see a couple of more degenerate things, like handholding, imagine!

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Great art, plot is so straight to the point it's funny but still feels hot just because of the art. I also like how comical the little brother acts. Solid doujin.

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