Hi! This is my first time uploading content; if I've made any mistakes, please let me know. I'm still learning how to create comics and similar projects, but I wanted to share some of my creations. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Good first effort The most salient critique that comes to mind is that the text only portions are hard to read. The pink on black does my eyes no favors and the text is blurry besides that, try a lighter font on the black perhaps? And render the text sharper Other than that it's a short and sweet story, the right amount of complicated for 14 pages