PEAK VANILLA 9.2/10

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pg 3, "peaks my interest" should read piques.

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naggers yeah

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002
OG: その延長でついハマってしまったのが…
TL: "To extend to that, it's why I'm hooked..."
ED: he gets hooked by extension of the "simulated experience". the way it's worded now seems like he's extending the previous point he's making vs the result of the experience itself

OG: 何探してんの？
TL: "Whatcha lookin' into?"
ED: looking for, not looking into

003
OG: あたし文字ばっかだとすぐ眠くなるからさ
TL: "I snooze off easily just from reading simple texts"
ED: she's not talking about the complexity, just that it only contains text

004
OG: ベッタベタな恋愛小説かよ
TL: "Some kinda beddy-bye rom book"
ED: not sure what you were getting at with beddy-bye, but he's talking about it being a hacky romance novel

005
OG: 猛アタックして身分違いを越えて結ばれるんだ～
TL: "That attacks fiercely, forming a bond that transcends difference in social status"
ED: this line doesn't make sense, as far as what "that" is referring to. but in any case, "attack" as a loan word and doesn't carry the same connotation as it does in English

006
OG: ゴカイ / だから…
TL: "Yeah you're right"
ED: he doesn't admit anything

OG: あの / きっと / みまちがい…
TL: "It was just a misunderstanding"
ED: he's saying her eyes are playing tricks on her

007
OG: なーんてね
TL: "Shocker, right"
ED: she's taking it back

009
OG: あはっビクビクするのおもしろ♡
TL: "It's fun to get all jumped up ♡"
ED: she finds it funny that his dick is jumpy

OG: ていうかここ暑いね…
TL: "...considering how hot it is in here"
ED: this is meant to be a separate point from the previous bubble, they aren't related so it's not about taking the room temperature into consideration

etc

Last edited on 22 April 2024, 14:07.

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OG: 迷うな…
TL: "Which to pick..."
ED: this is imperative not interrogative. he's telling himself not to hesitate

no, that line was correct, the な there is not an imperative, he was saying that he's not sure which to pick.

and with that, the next one
OG: 迷うって何が？
TL: "To pick from what?"
ED: she's asking what he's hesitating for

is also already correct.

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sure, I lean more towards elongating なぁ to land on something like "which to pick" but for the sake of reaching tag minimums I will add two others to the original comment

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