Reposting comment from Meganeko.

And also tagging your gallery.

pg 1

Raw：わたくしタマムシジムのエリカと申します。
your TL: I'm Erika from Yumamushi gym.
Actual TL: It's Tamamushi, Not Yumamushi or if you want to be more accurate, Celadon Gym.

Raw: 変わった香り。。。
your TL: Wait, this scent...
Actual TL: She's saying it smells strange. You make it as if she recognizes what she's smelling.

pg 2

Raw: うおｗ また吹いた
your TL: Hoho, you moan again.
Actual TL: He's saying she squirted again.

Raw: こんなじゃ草タイプジムリーダー務まんないでしょ
Your TL: It seems like being the gym leader isn't the right fit for you.
Actual TL: He's saying that she is not fit to be grass-type gym leader (implying that water-type suits her more)

Raw: タンマタンマ やばいって。。。あ
Your TL: That mouth is dangerous...
Actual TL: You missed the part where he told her to stop/ slow down.

Raw: 。。。タンマっつったろーが
Your TL：This mouth that always speaks softly...
Actual TL: He's scolding her for not listening to him to slow down.

Raw: ちゃんと全部飲んだ？
Your TL: Did it take it all properly?
Actual TL: He's asking her if she drink it all properly.

Pg 4

Raw: 。。。ははは 自分で振ってら おもしれー
Your TL: Hahaha... The way you shake you hips is quite amusing...
Actual TL: Assuming that the artist wrote a typo here, 振ってら instead of 振ってる, he saying that he finds it "amusing" that she's humping him on her own, not the way she's shaking her hips.

Raw: あー いきそ。。。
Your TL: Ah... Here we go...
Actual TL: He's saying he's about to cum

Raw: ホーレ いっちにいっち。。。 に
Your TL: Accept it all in... side
Actual TL: He's literally just counting one, two, one, two.

Raw: 出る出る きもちー
Your TL: Teen pussies are the best!
Actual TL: He's saying that he's cumming and it feels good. Erika age's was never even mentioned in the game/ anime so you literally pulled this one out of your ass.

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