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[Ozawa Yoshi] Lamia Ran-sama Marunomi (Touhou Project) [English] [Vr1bo]

[オザワヨシ] ラミア藍様丸呑み (東方Project) [英訳]

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Posted:2024-05-08 18:56
Parent:2912961
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:3.19 MiB
Length:2 pages
Favorited:160 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.64

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Posted on 08 May 2024, 18:56 by:   Vr1bo    PM
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Goated artist. I might some other when i have some time

Pixiv : https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/118058717
Twitter: https://twitter.com/__ZAW__
Skeb : https://skeb.jp/@__ZAW__

Raw : /g/2907348/2e40904522/
Posted on 08 May 2024, 17:17 by:   taliphone    PM
Score +12
based, bless you.
Posted on 08 May 2024, 18:35 by:   The_Riddler69    PM
Score +22
Can't understand basic grammar or punctuation.
You couldn't even keep the text inside the bubbles.
The first text bubble is cutting off dialogue.
bruh
Posted on 08 May 2024, 18:43 by:   Vr1bo    PM
Score +8
Yup you're right i'm going to change it

Edit : Done. Do not be afraid of posting comments on the translation it's one of my first. Also English is my second language so some grammar errors are to be expected (though this time i had forgotten a word in the first speech bubble)
Posted on 08 May 2024, 22:35 by:   scrump80    PM
Score +6
Dunno what it looked like before but the grammar seems mostly alright now. The first speech bubble on the first page seems a little confusing though. Hope we get more translations of zawa's works.
Posted on 09 May 2024, 09:07 by:   Vr1bo    PM
Score +3
Thanks, i will try to see if i can make it better. I plan to translate his other works too
Posted on 15 May 2024, 15:44 by:   Bakkerman    PM
Score +6
While The_Riddler69 is technically correct, there are still better ways to say it. After all, he takes his time to translate it to begin with. All you do is yap in the comment section.

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