What is up with the grammar? I don't know whether this is a horrible machine translations or someone who clearly doesn't know english. Usually even machine translations have better grammar than this.

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might qualify as a rewrite

001
OG: ぐはぁっ！
TL: "Oh no!"
ED: this is a grunt

OG: 女性に無理やり交際を迫るなど言語道断！
TL: "You are still so naive"
ED: she's saying it's absurd to force a girl into a relationship

OG: 恥を知りなさい！チンピラ！
TL: "Directly admitting to being shameless! Scum"
ED: she is shaming him

002
OG: 覚えてやがれ！
TL: "We remember this!"
ED: he's not speaking for his crew

OG: ありがとう武討さん
TL: "Thank you for your helop with the class."
ED: she is addressed by name (Takeuchi-san)

OG: お気になさらず
TL: "No need to be polite with me"
ED: she's saying "don't worry about it"

OG: さすが風紀委員長
TL: "Not worthy of being the disciplinary committee head"
ED: this isn't about her worthiness

003
OG: クソっ！あの女むかつくぜ！！
TL: "What a fierce woman."
ED: he's talking about being upset by her

OG: 仕方ねぇよ武討が相手じゃよぉ
TL: "Yeah, her martial arts are no joke too."
ED: there is no mention of her martial arts ability, just that she is the one they're dealing with

OG: なんだ？あいつの事知ってんの？
TL: "What are you, a pussy?"
ED: he's asking about her notoriety

OG: 喧嘩がメッチャ強くて
TL: "Fierce and capable of fighting"
ED: this is about her but the rewritten context makes it unclear in the TL

OG: この辺りのチンビラ何人も病院送りにしてるらしい
TL: "She clearly thinks she can have her way with us"
ED: this is about the amount of people she's hospitalized in the area

OG: 艶慈恵留学園の戦乙女って有名だぜ？
TL: "Yanchi Eiryou High-schools[sic] 'The Valkyrie, huh?"
ED: he's not asking "huh", he's letting the other guy know about her reputation

OG: お前は触れたか？
TL: "You wanna touch them too?"
ED: he's asking if the others copped a feel

OG: え？
TL: "Yeah."
ED: huh?

004
OG: こいつか？昨日お前らボコったってのは
TL: "I am the brother of the are the[sic] guys you beat yesterday"
ED: completely made up line, this isn't even addressed to her

OG: そうっッス剛志さん
TL: "Aniki it's her!"
ED: he addresses him by name, not "aniki"

OG: 助っ人頼りのお礼参りとは男の癖に情けない
TL: "Helping others is important. It's just something I do effortlessly"
ED: completely made up, she's challenging their manhood

OG: 何度でも反省させてあげますよ
TL: "I can manage all of you."
ED: she's saying she can make them all reflect on their actions

etc

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Every upload from this guy seems to be a spotty "translation"

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How can I get MP here ?

anyone help me

why are there TAGS blocked for upvotes here???

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Oh dear cool comic love the ending why the fuck this looks like AI translated and why people keep thinking that this counts as "good enough"? At this point I rather read it in Chinese. And I dont even know Chinese.

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Translation aside the work is pretty good but... whew... that is some extreme boob size inconsistency.

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