this looks like another telephone translation from Chinese plus MTL. the title was even copied from the Chinese gallery

002
OG: その前…子供の頃から空気の様な存在…
TL: "Before that...ever since I was a child, there was an existence like air..."
ED: he's talking about himself, the Chinese TL gets this right

OG: 連絡をとっても返事はそっけなく
TL: "Even if I try to contact her, her reply is piercing"
ED: he's talking about how short her replies are, not how they pierce him

003
OG: あ…ああ芽唯華
TL: "Ah...ah mei"
ED: this is lifted from the Chinese TL. her name is Meika

OG: 一年間…僕はこの義妹の妹として…
TL: "1 year...me...as my stepsister's younger sister"
ED: he's completely coherent while narrating here

004
OG: すっごく可愛いから♡
TL: "Because it's so cute"
ED: she's not telling him to hurry because it's cute. the Chinese TL gets this right (穿上可是會很可愛哦)

OG: ちゃんと断らないと
TL: "If I don't refuse properly..."
ED: this is a complete statement, no "if"

OG: そうなんだ
TL: "That's right"
ED: she's not saying anything's right. she's reacting to his statement. the Chinese TL gets this right too

OG: じゃあ
TL: N/A

005
OG: じゃあ戻ってるから
TL: "Well, I'm back"
ED: she's not proclaiming that she's back

006
OG: 元に戻ったつもりの
TL: "I thought I was going back..."
ED: he's not talking about what he thought, he's talking about his actual attempts

OG: 心の隙間を
TL: "The gap in my heart"
ED: this is connected to the rest of the narration, not a standalone statement

007
OG: お兄ちゃんモジモジしちゃって
TL: "Big brother I'm restless"
ED: she's not talking about herself. the Chinese TL gets this right (哥哥你...)

etc

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For the love of God, stop putting out these shit translations.

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One of the saddest part of all these really shit tls of especially this one is that Jaycie tled all but 6 pages and never finished this one. I have been sitting on it for like a year and I am unsure on if I should upload it or not.

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