I Actually like NTR, but Takeda's recent work seems to be both creatively bankrupt and hard to read... making them not really fap materials anymore, which is a shame since I doubt anyone read his works beyond this reason

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I dont read it cause its toom much text in small plus it doesnt matter, the character is top tier but I tought it would be like the other ones but this is a rought sketch if I have to choose I would prefer to saw those animations that the qualitu is good

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somebody knows what happened with the last NTR manga, that one about milf and black dude ?

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@duranuchiha He delayed it until he finishes the RPG, but who knows maybe his opinion changes and he decides to continue it in the next few months

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For those who don´t know, this work is still rough drawings, Takeda will finish it later and add 9 more pages.

He also mentioned something about a sequel, since he wants to see Seina transformed into a sex offender.

@el_taco_loco Actually BBC doujin is on hiatus till who knows, Sentai is supposed to be reanuded after RPG is finished, but there´s no date for BBC, he even said he will just upload the rough drawings he has if he doesn´t make it.

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Man how long has Takeda's RPG been in development? Feels like forever at this point. Real shame since it's apparently the reason all his other work has suffered.

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When will he finished that milf doujin ffs, he needs to stop jumping between project and start making priorities

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this should get a longer doujin/or a game after hes done with thentrpg he's doin or somethin, the rpg seems to be on the last part of its development but i could be remembering incorrectly.

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lmao, MC deserves to get cucked if he actually believed that nonsense.

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What Takeda smoking tight now? He jumps from one project to another and they all follow the same plot, strong woman becomes cumdump for a bunch ugly ass mofos. Dude seriously went off the deep end when he promised to only do ntr.

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MTL btw ..

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Oh right, Takeda exists.

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@RaizelX: This is only the first half from what I understand. For an artist who keeps saying he has to much on his plate he seems to love piling more stuff on it.

Still waiting for him to finish that Milf manga...

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why is he still drawingi piss colored cum? its fucking disgting! what went wront with takeda

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all of the handwritten lines were erased

001
OG: 住吉警部とバディを組み捜査にあたる
TL: N/A

OG: 優秀で正義感が強くクールだが中身は意外と普通の女子住吉に好意あり
TL: "She is a competent woman with a strong sense of justice, but on the inside she is a surprisingly normal girl with a crush on Sumiyoshi."
ED: she isn't described as competent in this line

OG: 対能力者スーツに適正のある者たちで組まれたチームだ俺もチームの一員でバディを組んでいるのが後輩の…
TL: "I'm part of a team that's equipped with anti-powers suits, and I'm partnered with a newcomer in the team."
ED: not a newcomer, just a junior

002
OG: 「１１時２３分 現行犯逮捕睡眠誘発能力で女性たちを睡眠強姦…本当に許せまんね」
TL: "Caught red-handed at 1:20am using his sleep inducing ability to rape woman...really unforgivable"
TL: wrong time

OG: 正義感が強く実力も折り紙付き決して性犯罪者を許さないという信念をもつ頼れる相棒で…
TL: "He is a reliable partner who has a strong sense of justice, is highly skilled, and has a firm belief that he will never forgive

003
OG: はぁ…スーツは汗臭くなるのが欠点ですね…キワどいし…
TL: "Hah...the downside of the suit is that it makes me sweaty and smelly...and it's squeaky..."
ED: she doesn't say it's squeaky

OG: それより先輩私が先に容疑者を捕まえたら…
TL: "Anyways, senpai, about that suspect I caught earlier..."
ED: missing detail about who arrests the suspect first (related to next line)

006
OG: デカちん
TL: N/A

007
OG: ザーメンうめっ
TL: N/A

008
OG: んべ♥んべ♥しゅきぃ♥
TL: N/A

OG: くっ…！やめろ
TL: N/A

OG: 性犯罪者め…！！
TL: N/A

OG: しょ…署長なぜココに…
TL: N/A

etc

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I’m not saying this to shit on him, but my god, I really wish Takeda would just focus on one thing and just get it done. Particularly his 3 big projects, that being the RPG game, Sentai CG and Milf doujin. There’s also the fact he’s not in the best health as well.

Last edited on 25 May 2024, 04:20.

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hopefully we see her complete training later also i agree with asianfetus he needs to focus down on one thing to completion.

hopefully we see her complete training later also i agree with asianfetus he needs to focus down on one thing to completion.

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The BBC milf doujin is already dead, so only 2 main projects.

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I wonder what happened for Takeda Hiromitsu to ditch everything for this cheap crap.

I don't like NTR to begin with but some stories here and there are nice enough to be worth a read. Hiromitsu's stuff on the other hand is so stupid it's offensive, even nerds drugged on power fantasy would have trouble enjoying it.

Such a waste, he made some really good doujins years ago, and his past works (before his NTR funk started) were of higher quality too.

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when Takeda will finish a single project? as far as I know none of his many project are finished lmao

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This thing is so fucking phoned in, damn.

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I don't understand the story? when did the chief mind control her with his fluids?

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alright 7 new pages are out

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god damn, he's still working on this shit? Move on already.

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So this crap instead of c104 or any other project he worked on? He’s a fucking scammer now for fuck sake

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aaaaaand now she's a shotacon, god damn it.

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I think I see Nikke

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wish he’d make more doujin nowadays

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The most recently updated torrent is just a much older version of the file.

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I was actually looking forward to this doujin a lot since the start, but with it completed now, I can’t help but feel a bit disappointed with how it turned out. Compared to this other works, this one just feels so subpar and rushed.

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I wish he would actually stick with the premise instead of just turning it into another cosplay mind control work. Just like with the sentai work it starts off great, but afterwards the original outfits the girls wear are rarely used. For this work, the original outfit is never actually used in any scene. (Unless you want to count that ugly modified version at the end.)

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Sorry but recent Takeda has been a miss lately. The last work that was good by Takeda was Akane. I don't know what he's thinking by creating all these damn works where it's Mind Control + NTR. Adding Mind Control to an NTR story completely nullifies the "NTR" feeling for me. The main reason I enjoy NTR is to enjoy watching the bitch genuinely become sluttier.

@rsx205
Thanks for the critique. Sometimes it's hard for me to find the original Japanese to read, so I just give English translators the benefit of the doubt in that they will translate everything accurately. But for this one I'll read the original Japanese version.

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Dumbest plot I've seen. Couldn't finish reading this.

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