[Kuusou Monochrome (Abi)] Bousou shita Sensei ni Oshitao Sarete SEX Suru Hon | A book about being pushed down and having sex by a sexually uncontrollable sensei (Blue Archive) [English] [Gomen Scans] [Digital]
02 OG:まさか晄輪大祭の裏でブラックマーケとの怪しげな物が取引されてるなんて TL:Though I didn't expect that the black market was doing some suspicious transactions behind the sports festival... ED:"The black market" isnt' the subject in this sentence. You also omitted the name of the festival 晄輪.
04 OG:これって危ない薬品とはじゃないよね...? TL:It isn't some dangerous chemicals that spilled onto you, right? ED:I'm aware you switched the placement of the bubbles, but you gave the translated line to the wrong speaker. All the following bubbles belong to the wrong speaker.
04 OG:これは TL:It's the... ED:Nonsense.
05 OG:非常に危険な代物なので TL:And it's a dangerous drug. ED:And it's an incredibly dangerous article/good/etc
06 OG:汗の他にほのかな雌の香りもして股間に効く...! TL:In addition to your sweat, is the faint of a female scent that mingles with the scent of the crotch! ED:HIS crotch. And no, no smell mingling here.
06 OG:どうしよう止まらない TL:What should I do? I can't stop! ED:Wrong speaker/Mistranslation. Pick your poison.
09 OG:そんなエッチな顔でおねだりされたら TL:If you tease me with such an erotic face like that... ED:Wrong translation of おねだり
10 OG:太もも触っだけでそんなに感じるのエロいね... TL:It feels so erotic just by touching these soft thighs. ED:Not by touching. He's talking about her reactions.
11 OG:晄輪大祭が始まってユウかが目に留まる度ずっと... TL:My eyes has been glued to Yuuka since the sports festival started. ED:Missed the nuance of 度
12 OG:あぁ~むっちり太ももの膣圧最高♡ TL:Ahh~ This voluptuous pussy thigh is the best!♡ ED:Missing 膣圧. Also, where did you get pussy thigh?
12 OG:汗がローション代わりになって太ももおまんこだよ! TL:The sweat is like a lotion for the thighs and pussy! ED:Not thighs and pussy, it's thigh-pussy. Also lotion is 和製英語. Lube is the correct term in this case.