Well, certainly isn't a Oh! Great work (^_^). The artwork, is good, but of course it can't be compared to the original, anyway, personally I must say is the second best Tenjho Tenge stuff I've seen, (the other being "Etsuraku In Gi" by Deep Grand), altough there are a nice resemblance in the eyes; the action is good and a bit inciting; the plot in both stories is good, however I'd pick the second; and finally the censorShit is average. Overall a good Doujin, specially for those who love Maya (just as me).
Final Call: Worth to Download. Maybe someday Oh! Great will do a Doujin of his characters.... maybe..... someday.....