001
OG: 犬のお姉ちゃんの禁欲
TL: Abstinence.
ED: this is part of the entire title

002
OG: わうっ…
TL: Ouch...
ED: she isn't in pain

003
OG: 椛お姉ちゃんは
TL: Ko...ko-ko-nee...
ED: her name is Momiji

OG: 我慢の限界だった！！
TL: I couldn't hold it back anymore!
ED: wrong subject, this is a continuation of the prev line

004
OG: ひっ！！
TL: Oh!!!
ED: this is a scared response

OG: 言いつけ通り我慢していましたよ…？
TL: Have you been patient as instructed...?
ED: wrong speaker, and this isn't a question

006
OG: 僕が出したものを飲み干してしまった…
TL: I drank up everything he gave me
ED: subject/object mixup

OG: 大丈夫…じゃなかったです
TL: Are you okay...no, I'm not...
ED: she's saying she wasn't okay when she had to hold back

008
OG: お姉ちゃんの膣…とても熱い…
TL: Big sis, your core...it's burning up...
ED: he's talking about her pussy

OG: ぐううう…
TL: oohhh...
ED: this is a growl

OG: ぐるるるる…
TL: Round and round we go...
ED: this is a growl

010
OG: は…
TL: Y-yes,
ED: this is a stutter (related to next bubble)

OG: はいってく…
TL: I'll come in...
ED: wrong speaker

OG: びっくりして漏らしてしまいました…
TL: I got so scared , I couldn't hold it in...
ED: surprised not scared

OG: …はい
TL: ...Yes?
ED: she's not asking

etc

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