it looks like you're using Chinese scans

001
OG: 克己くーんバイトお疲れ様
TL: Thanks for the hard work today Keiji
ED: not sure if I've ever seen Keiji for this name

OG: いやーシフト交代ありがとね今日はお礼にいいとこ連れてってあげるよ
TL: I will take you to a nice place as thanks
ED: missing first half of line

OG: あはは出れば出るだけその分稼げますから…
TL: Overtime pays better after-all[sic]
ED: he's just saying the more shifts he picks up the more he can earn

OG: こういう裏の風俗さ
TL: We are going to its backside
ED: he's talking about it being this kind of a back alley/underground establishment

002
OG: でもこの違法風俗ならやってるってワケよ
TL: This brothel may not be operating under the full extent of the law
ED: he's saying the brothel is still operating despite being illegal (related to next line)

OG: これって…写真の女性が壁尻の人ってことだよな…
TL: The woman in the picture is the one behind the wall
ED: he's unsure

003
OG: 普段風俗なんかに行く金なんてないし丁度いいか
TL: Since I'm always broke, I rarely visit a place like this.
ED: missing end of line

004
OG: キッツ…
TL: Squeeze
ED: this isn't sfx

005
OG: 顔見えない分肉便器って感じで興奮するな
TL: Not being able to see her face is kind of a let down
ED: he's saying the opposite

OG: イけ！イっちまえッ！
TL: I'm cumming!♥♥
ED: these are imperatives

008
OG: おっいい匂いだな今日は味噌煮か
TL: Hmmm, it smells so goood!
ED: missing second half of line

OG: そうだ…
TL: 這樣看...
ED: Chinese

etc

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man it never gets tiring seeing someone in the comments do better translation than the one that did this gallery

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p. 16
>ABAJ ABAJ ABAJ ABAJ ABAJ ABAJ ABAJ
She just wanted to talk to her brother about Adventures Bizarre About JoJo, especially her favorite part, Diamond Is Not Crash.

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@GETPREGNATEGET0 It's bit sad too tho, so many people knowledgeable enough that even just making a page once in a while could lead to a fuckton of things translated. It would be nice having an overlay system similar the one from gelb**ru, but applied to manga galleries. Then after something gets completed by the community some typesetters and redrawers could finish the work.

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