004
OG: 先生に…誰もが一番になりたいんだよね。
TL: It seems like everyone wants sensei to be their first, don't they?
ED: she's not talking about first times (related to next page)

OG: 私 / まだ実感湧かない
TL: I... / Can't believe it
ED: missing first part of second half

005
OG: 自信…
TL: Is it because of your pride?
ED: this isn't about pride

014
OG: ハナエちゃんは覚えていてえらいですね。おかげで助かりました。
TL: You're pretty good at remembering, Hanae-chan. Thank you for your assistance.
ED: this is stronger than just a simple thank you

016
OG: 今日はありもので作るとして…牛乳は欲しいかな。
TL: I'll just make with[sic] what I have for today...I might need some milk.
ED: wants not needs

017
OG: ありがとうございましたー
TL: N/A

OG: 牛乳、鉛筆、手榴弾。飲み物２つに研磨剤。トマトは安かったから買ったけど…
TL: I bought two drinks, abrasives, tomoatoes[sic], milk, pencils, and grenades since they were cheap.
ED: there are 3 separate parts in this bubble that got combined together

026
OG: あれから考えたんだ。どうすべきかって。
TL: After this, we should think about what we need to do.
ED: he's speaking about the past

029
OG: 拒絶されて辛いはずなのに
TL: It must be painful being rejected, but...
ED: she's talking about how she should be suffering

OG: 好きに決まってるだろ。でも…割り切るよ。
TL: I know I love you, but...I have to be separated from you.
ED: this isn't about physical separation

030
OG: いいのですか？じゃあお言葉に甘えて
TL: Are you sure? Then I'll take your word for it.
ED: this phrase doesn't make sense in context

OG: 好きという言葉は嘘じゃないんですね
TL: When you said that you loved me, it wasn't a lie.
ED: this is a question (related p34)

031
OG: 正面から話せばきっと何か…、何かって何だろう。
TL: I'm sure that if I just talk to them directly, they'll tell me something..anything...
ED: she's thinking that something might happen if they talk. also them?

032
OG: 前から見つめらるのは慣れてるけど…
TL: I'm used to people staring at me from the front, but...
ED: he's used to direct confrontation

OG: こっちから切り出してもな…
TL: I'm not used to being stared from behind.
ED: he's talking about initiating

OG: どこでつまずいた？
TL: What's wrong with it?
ED: he's asking where she's stuck

OG: えっと…問いの2のあてはめる問題
TL: Let's see...question 2 fits problem 3
ED: that's not a 3

033
OG: あんまりネットで煽っちゃだめだよ
TL: Don't stir up too much trouble with your tome again, okay?
ED: tome?

OG: 早く話しなさい
TL: N/A
ED: erased

034
OG: またあの好きを疑っちゃう、けど
TL: I doubt I'll ever love him again, but...
ED: she's not talking about herself

OG: 先生は誰からも頼られる人だって分かっていたのに
TL: I know that sensei was one who does his best,
ED: one that everyone relies on

OG: 藤棚で出会ったときのように素直な言葉をかける勇気もない
TL: I haven't spoke[sic] to him as honestly as I did when we met at the wisteria terllis.
ED: she can't find the courage to speak like she did then

OG: もう分かってたじゃん私の気持ち
TL: I know that my feelings for sensei...
ED: this is a standalone sentence

OG: 私の方から遠ざけたくせに
TL: It has kept me away from him.
ED: this is separate from the prev bubble and connected to the next bubble instead ("Even though ...")

idk awkward english aside it looks like the rewrites continue on

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I'll try harder next time. I'll take your words to mind and we'll do a revision soon thanks to your help. It's just that the doujin was really hard to translate due to how it was written, however I will try my hardest. -Thighs

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