I manually translated this page by page with using Gimp (please tell me if you know an easier way), I am not as proficient with traditional Chinese compared to Simplified but I used Google Translate to bridge the gaps. I also added some spice to it (since the Chinese translation also seemed scuffed a little)

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Anyway, Fakku already TLd this. You can grab it in one of the Unlimited packs on Nyaa.

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This is why we need a 0 star option for voting, 0.5 isn't low enough.

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I have no comment on the TL accuracy, but the typesetting is strange.

- The font size changing between bubbles is a bit distracting, especially when it seems like the normal font size would fit.
- You have the text all left justified instead of being the typical center justified. If you are having trouble getting a line to fit a bubble, manually break it up line by line, maybe even word by word, and drag it around to make it work. Worst case, the infrequent linebreak in the middle of a word is acceptable.
- You seemed to do some sort of background rectangle for the text most of the time, and so a lot of the original text is peeking out. The normal method is to make a 'clean' version that has all the text scrubbed before adding in new text, often those cleaned versions even get uploaded on their own to aid other language TLs.
- Take a look at extra font options. Everyone clowns on comic-sans, but similar style fonts are a good choice for this use case.

Sorry to say that I am putting a low star score for the gallery, but the cleanup and typesetting looks like a first time attempt without analyzing what others have done.

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@Gabil I concur, this is terrible.

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001
OG: ある日の帰宅時のことでした
TL: Today I was coming home~
ED: she's not talking about the current day

OG: 大丈夫です
TL: It's not important
ED: he's saying he's fine

OG: このアパートのコじゃないよね？
TL: You live in the building right?
ED: she's asking about him NOT living in the building

OG: ねえフラついてるよホントに大丈夫？
TL: You look a bit dizzy, are you sure?
ED: she's saying he looks out of it

OG: 構わないでくださ
TL: Please mind your own business okay?
ED: he's telling her not to worry about him

002
OG: えっと…
TL: N/A

OG: ごちそうさまでした…
TL: Well I must thank you...
ED: specifically for the meal

OG: ありがとう美味しかったです
TL: This really is refreshing
ED: he says the food was good

OG: スッキリするかもよ
TL: So we can see how severe it is?
ED: she's saying it might make him feel better

003
OG: そっかー…
TL: N/A

OG: しかもそれでイジメられるしもう死にたい
TL: If I see it can't be fixed and I'm abandoned I just wanna die
ED: he's saying if things don't go well with his parents he'd rather die than get bullied for it. the Chinese TL got this right (我看搞不好我會被霸凌然後就會想死)

OG: そのうち生きてて良かったーて思えることもあるかもよ
TL: If one day you wanted to revive that would also be a good idea
ED: she's saying it's possible that one day he'll be glad he's alive. the Chinese TL got this right (或許哪一天你會突然有種活著也很好的想法)

OG: ごめん
TL: Lay down
ED: this isn't sfx. the Chinese TL got this wrong (躺下)

etc

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Good people pay for the superior Fakku Unlimited subscription ^_° https://www.fakku.net/hentai/run-away-english
Only $14.95 a month for being able to read over 9000 different books! noice

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Hey you all commentators. This punk of an uploader used MTL. Fuck him, and fuck you too! I piss in your faces!

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@Waitugreat Shaddup, you shill. I'd rather read the raw of this than both of the trash you and this MTLer are presenting. Starting to wonder if Fakku's works are even accurate themselves...

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