It's a retranslation of /g/1221341/b804d379ac/ using the original "translation" as a base: /g/1317640/f18cf3eff4/

I kept the title along with the parts that were already accurate or close enough as is.

It's seriously sickening the amount of half-rewritten "translations" that goes unnoticed for years simply because they are grammatically correct.

If there are more errors I missed (or if I made any myself), please let me know.

Page 24 has a "your" misspelling, but that's all I noticed. thx for the fresh TL!

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Thanks for your input, don't think it's worth an update right now but i'll proably do it later down the line.

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