This is my first Comics, i'm a Patreon creator!

Ironically, I think this AI comic would be "improved" by plastering more patreon watermarks over everything, obscuring the mediocrity of it all.

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Lmao, creator. You didn't create anything

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> Huosewife

another great uploader to add to the exclude list

Base +6, McHyp +9, Stelley +6, BLT123 +14, albertzeb +6

Maybe, just maybe. You should change the seeds of the face or use face swap to distinguish your work.

Base +2, Stelley +6, albertzeb -6

Well, at least anyone stupid enough to pay into your patreon deserves to get scammed.

Base +8, McHyp +9, Stelley +6, BLT123 +14, Haborym +8, Dr0mann +12, topkeky02 +6, John Silker +6, Thulia51 +6, DrunkenWeeb +21, albertzeb +6

well this is way more better than all of those shitty MTL/Ai translation

Base +6, Trickster56 +6, Stelley -6, BLT123 -14, topkeky02 -6, Thulia51 -6, DrunkenWeeb -21, Cocassu -7, albertzeb -6

So, I'm going to ignore the "creation" method and ironic overprotectiveness with the watermark and just tell you what I see, and try to be as constructive as possible:
>No punctuation at the end of sentences
>Takes until the second page (excluding cover page) for the first sentence to lack a verb entirely
>Outfit is inconsistent between panels and buttons and unbuttons every millisecond
>Glaring AI generation artifacts such as character and clothes nonsensically and distractingly merging together like a melting snow sculpture (/s/a189e7c34b/2973601-5 bottom left)
>Poses are quite repetitive which I would understand if it was to reduce drawing time, which should be an advantage of the tool you're using

All of these things are quality issues that have nothing to do with the moral outrage around generative AI. And you know what, let's say some people are ok with that. The fact of the matter is, for many people it is a huge turn off. Many of us do not want to deal with these qualitative weaknesses that AI generated sequential images are prone to unless you highly increase your effort spent curating and editing your output, if you're currently doing that at all, no offence.
Do you know what those people do to avoid these issues? They hide AI galleries. Because that's the whole point of having a tagging system. And in this case specifically, the AI tag. So why is this not tagged as AI generated? That is all it takes to remove 90% of all people who have accounts or understand the search function that dislike AI for ethical or quality reasons from your ratings and comments, we'll quite literally filter ourselves. Please tag accordingly in the future. While I'm at it, the male mind control tag doesn't apply unless a male is being controlled.

Once you started tagging your galleries as AI, refer to the list for what you might want to work on if you want people who don't mind heavy AI usage to actually pay you, though if this is what your tool gives you, drawing practice might actually be faster. Every 12 year-old's DeviantArt passion project doesn't have the consistency issues on display here. And I would legitimately rather look at that and use my imagination than have inconsistent information.
Whether you use AI or not, raise your standards, you can do better.

Edit/PS: I talk about tagging, but in this case you need to add it to the title (mb, still learning myself). Yes, people are currently doing that for you, but if you did it yourself, you'd avoid a lot of complaints, as I said.

Base +2, Stelley +6, BLT123 +14, Dr0mann +12, John Silker +6, albertzeb +6, uanime5 +7, Eddiral +4

this is unfappable

Base +6, BLT123 +14, albertzeb +6

Can't believe an "AI artist" puts watermarks on everything like they have created anything at all.

Base +6, Haborym +8, John Silker +6, Moonsnake -8, Cocassu +7, albertzeb +6

Damn, so much criticism and I must agree with some part, but I must say this comic is much better than the average level of AI that I see now.

Base +7, DrunkenWeeb -21, Cocassu -7, albertzeb -6, uanime5 -7

I understand what you see and i try to improve my next works.

There something i want to say to those that thuoght that i make no work, it's not like this. Ai generation is for sure a shortcut, but the generation process is so long because you need to describe every image you want to create and every generation require time, over this, maybe every 40/50 image generated 1 is ok for the idea you have in mind then the generation process requires so much time.

Also i love create erotic story, then the creative part is not only the image generation, retouch and organization, but also, the most important part by me, is the story you create to make the reader aroused to enjoy the content. It is an understatement to say that since it is generated with ai it does not require work, is not as you can tell to the IA 'please generate an erotic comics for me', it not works this way.

I only want to say that, but i accept all your comments as a push to make better works.

Base +1, Moonsnake +8, Cocassu -7, albertzeb -6, uanime5 -7, Siriusness +6, Eddiral +4

so many haters :D

keep it up, Anna Stam

Like the model style & LoRA you`ve used

Base +12