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somebodyoverthemoon, Can you be more specific about what the problem is? We translated from Japanese to Russian, and from Russian to English. What exactly didn't you like in our translation? We will fix the mistakes

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I'm not gonna point out every single thing, so just a few pages in to where I stopped reading...

ついまたやってしまった...
- "Well, that was good."
- "I ended up doing it again..."

滅多に来客はないとはいえ...流石に注意しなければ...
- "We don't get visitors often, but we can't let our guard down."
- "Even if it's rare to have visitors, I really should be careful..."
(Technically, this is mostly a problem because of the pronoun duplicating who needs to be careful.)

またお薦めですしたい子がいますので
- "I have a book I've been meaning to recommend to you"
- "I have another book to recommend to you"

待って！！早まらないで！！
- "Wait!!"
- "Wait!! Don't just immediately try to kill yourself!!"
(Note that the "Take your time!!!" in the next bubble was clearly meant to be in this one, AND it has the wrong meaning.)

は...離してください...！！
- "Leave it, please."
- "Pl-please let go...!!"

うわ力つよ...
- <Nothing was provided.>
- Uwah, she's so strong...
(You missed this completely. It didn't even bump into the next bubble on the next page.)

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Apparently we really did make a lot of mistakes.... Thanks for the reply, we'll try to fix it.

But we made a couple of "mistakes" on purpose to make it easier for the reader to understand what's going on (Not everyone will understand why she calls the books her children).

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Highest quality lmao

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Well, the art is cute AND there is no smell jokes. That's a 5★ for me

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We made a mistake for the first time and people already hate us, nothing new... (We will correct the mistakes soon)

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