https://x.com/HypnoNeet/status/1243070761759387649/

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/17859262

The dialog balloons in page 2 doesn't make sense. You need to read left, left, right, right to make it work, which doesn't comply with any norm of reading.

Base +6, sagematt -8, Robeast1991 -6, Sir_tenly -6, icortezi -6, weedlayer -10, firebomber -8, Captian Katsura -7, kryzrodzer -6, ziggyb +7, baneonplane +9, jaredh72 +7, Loyalty +7

Idk why people are down voting MDG159, they're right. Comparing to the raw, it looks like some bubbles were switched to the wrong side.

Base +6, Captian Katsura +7, ziggyb +7, baneonplane +9, jaredh72 +7

The Japanese order is top right to bottom right, then top left to bottom left (Or up-to-down, right-to-left.) The translation didn't change the vertical arrangement, but reversed the sides, so that it reads from top left to bottom left, to top right to bottom right, which feels awkward to anyone used to the Western method of horizontal writing left-to-right, up-to-down.

Original:
5 1
6 2
7 3
8 4
Translated:
1 5
2 6
3 7
4 8

Base +15, Captian Katsura +7, ziggyb +7

Good stuff, crossdressing yaoi X mind control / hypnosis is always a good combination, thanks a lot for all the effort and sharing :)

Base +57, Syerathe +13

Note: the Japanese is a machine translation, it's likely that the English is the original and jp is the translation.

Base +8