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Hey bru, like your work so far. Only major criticism I can offer up is: Please, improve the readability of your dialogue. Your choice of font, while thematically engaging, is so difficult to make out with your chosen colors for both characters and text that I could not read it without opening the original image, page 11 especially with that glowing bright red text on a darker background.

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I think that while this ticks boxes for a lot of people, the nipple stuff might lower the audience by a fair margin. But hey, if you got people on patreon paying for and liking it, more power to you. Good to have a niche.

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Thank you for the critique, I'm also starting to think it may be better that I improve upon the font choices and colors (I'm still struggling to figure it out personally). I may switch to have text focused though if I just can't figure out how to work with the text. The nipple stuff, while a turn off to others, is understandable. While unique nipple stuff is up to the commissioner (for I don't like to shut down interests of the one asking for such stuff), I may alter one constant I've done with them.

I have made a revised version that should have cleaner text and allow people to follow the story better, I hope this has been a massive improvement for all to enjoy.

Last edited on 22 July 2024, 17:42.

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