https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01237394.html

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Base +13, minase7 -6, Hugari -7

why the fuck all new torrents have only zeroes

Base +7, LouisPlasta +6, chiperzero -6

The best Asuna doujin to date. Incredible art too. Thanks.

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哦哦哦哦哦哦哦我tm插爆asuna的长乳

Base +7, jtsbaron +6

ai art doe meh

Base +6, Bananss +6, saiyu1 +7, david31476 +6, dltngus23 +6, chiperzero -6, Raynore -16, LeoNvolcove +6, yeiheng +6, schrea -6, sevalcat +6, formulachan +6, ErrorTime +9, and 14 more...

Is this really ai art? But there no info about it in dlsite.

Base +8, ezbreezy +6, Raynore +16, black_sabbath -18, bo jun +6, DOIHI3 +6, OtakuSuicida +6

Is not ai art the paneling is very consistent and not sloppy like the usual ai stuff does, this artist is just too good.

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Stop accusing artists of using AI just because they're good, you can just look at their pixiv/twitter and see their progress over the years, or literally just look at the uncompressed files

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When I look at the Hands and fingers... it's hard to believe that AI hasn't been used.

-Page 14 Asuna's right hand seems to have 6 fingers.
-Page 15 Sensei's finger seems to melt/fuse/disappear inside Asuna's breast.
-Page 18 Where Asuna seems to be catching cum what the fuck is happening to her hands ?
-Page 30 middle panel both of sensei's hands have 4 fingers.

Of course, there are more but I'm not gonna list every single one of those weird "fuck ups".

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汉化组快汉化，别逼我二弟求你

Base +6, 杨声器不成器 +25, fen19950424 +6, 迷糊老砖 +6, cxxx -6, black_sabbath -19, Izlude99 -6

同时有牢师优香bg/ノアユウ双性恋/明日奈ntr优香的要素...wtf

Base +6, 迷糊老砖 +6

lmao the four fingers on page 30 do go crazy.

A.I. slop unfortunately.

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I don't mind AI art, just as long as it doesn't look bad.

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呱！📮怎么落下了啊

Base +6

个人看的没那么仔细，一点外行人整体个人观感上的问题：1. 整体画风尤其是封面过于AI感（这个没啥说服力，我暂且只是提出）且和这作者之前的作品色彩可能像但是画出来的样子差很多。不知道有没有长期关注这位作者推特啥的人说说。2.内部很多页里Asuna的胸部形状变化的过于频繁和离谱了，这在我看的其它本子里是很少出现的。

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太苦了 優香

Base +6

Page 24 is especially telling it’s AI. Nonsensical and inconsistent linework on every single hand.

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fuck bitch archive

Base +6, hsf2999 -3, TheresaApocalys -7, Druem -7, BartzCecilTerra -6, black_sabbath -19, charlielucy -7, player4578 +6

不用想了，就是AI，仔细看就能看出来，封面彩图是AI出的，第三张黑白图因为尺寸问题下边还补了一点，但明显补画的结构有问题

Base +6, ohho2005 -6, himoud +9, scf123 +31, bo jun +6, black_sabbath +19, charlielucy +7, abc105123 +6, AzertyPorto +11

that famas is just wrong and way too big. The proportions are wrong and the pistol grip position is way to the back where it would overlap the magazine

This would be one of the best ai-using doujins out there if the artist took a slight bit more attention to details
Why ai? Check the background of page 5 and 6 the buildings provide a feel of modern city while the details just dont make sense.

Beautiful ‘long’ tits tho

Base +6, Mrkew -11, himoud +9, Druem +7, black_sabbath -19

I thought the background was CG, but this is awful.
The hand on page 24 is unbearable to look at.

Base +8, Nobody_Know +9, black_sabbath +19

A quick look through his twitter
https://x.com/sk_sk_chan_
and you can obviously see it's AI touch up, the artstyle completely changed after June 2024.

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Yep. This is AI.

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Sad to see this garbage infect doujins too.

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surprised Dlsite allowed this without an AI tag. This is just dishonest.

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你這瀏海比為師的GG還硬呀

Base +7

毫无疑问是ai👎

Base +7, 迷糊老砖 -6, ezbreezy +6, bo jun +6, Zarzzz +6, black_sabbath +19, Mrkew -11

I knew I felt uncomfortable with the manga, but it's AI.
The drawing itself is beautiful, but the flow of the panels and the perspective of the picture is so incoherent that it's totally weird.
It's evidence that you're drawing without seeing with your eyes.

Base +7, black_sabbath +19, charlielucy +7, Mrkew -11, AzertyPorto -11, PreggyPenny +6

去本人推特問有沒有用AI輔助的都會被黑單，可悲的作者

Base +16

dlsite took down this doujin since it was determined to be AI and posted without a AI tag.

Base +6, ezbreezy +6