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There's a bunch of double entendre like in "Restaurant of many orders" which inspired it
Update: Improved dialogue, if you have problems please be more specific

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you want people to pay you? for output like THIS?

lol

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@Daruna is there something wrong with the translation?

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@Keltzar Daruna's rudeness aside, I think you could benefit from a proofreader/rewriter. The dialogue feels off and stilted. I only got as far as the shower scene before calling it quits.

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It stopped at the best part.

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If we're going to be picky I really think you should of translate the brothel name Yamaneko to Wildcat instead of transliterating it to romanji. And maybe translate the whole page of 26 as well, since it seems like a 'invitation/threat' to the reader.

You may ask "why is translating Yamaneko so important? It's common practice that most places and titles aren't translated but just transliterated instead, so who cares?"

This is because the restaurant's name is a double entendre as well. Wildcat can mean exotic, custom, and rare but can also mean random, or wildcard. Which the latter two fit both the original and this parody. If you just transliterate the double entendre is lost. Even in the orginal story every version translates Yamaneko-ken to "RESTAURANT WILDCAT HOUSE" in english for this reason. And I do mean every version, english translated, animated, and original Japanese (with kanji under it).

Plus it also explains why the receptionist has cat eyes and catgirl outfit as well, it's a cat themed brothel.

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I'm working on an alternate translation. I'm not even 50% fluent but I read the script a little different than how it's translated here.

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mc got stealth shaved after the bath...

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