If I missed something or made a crucial mistake please tell me, as I am new to this.

Honestly, this seems like it would make for a great series. Hope to see more of this spunky heroine in the future.

Base +8, Darknessend +7, katiga -3, tgsos +8, biscardone +8, day of darkness +10, shuntensatsu +16, Dooderz -8

Empty bubble on pg19

Edit: thanks for the fix

Last edited on 22 August 2024, 07:56.

Base +6, Darknessend +7, katiga -3, tgsos -8, tobeunforgiven2 +27

Anyone else thinks this looks like blonde, muscular Nobara?

Base +6, Shinryu-Rex +11, Senshiman +6, Darknessend +7, katiga -3, tgsos +8, Royblackheart +6, golfpopo +7, Esetiodeahi +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +8, avrelivs +6

You're right, I accidentally disabled that one speech bubble from the viewport in my image editing program.

This is actually the most vanilla thing he has made. The monster doesn't have a spiked/bumped dick or a red rocket and it can speak and wears a mask and is even somewhat gentlemanly towards her.
I honestly also think this is his least interesting work so far, it tried to set up plot threads that didn't get to go anywhere as it suffers the same problem everything else he makes does. That it's really short. The "woman" mentioned didn't appear anywhere and that would be an example. We might get a sequel, but I'd want another Yuugi or something entirely new first as this man has so far been entirely dedicated to what in my opinion is the best thing in hentai right now, and while I like this and wouldn't mind more of it, I don't think the girl is as hot nor the monster as interesting and it would be a waste when there is so much potential for shit he can do with this formula of submissive muscle girl x monster.

Last edited on 22 August 2024, 02:04.

Base +6, delborg +21, Darknessend +7, katiga -3, Nakama_P +6, golfpopo +7, Damoriel +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +8

Other langauges and versions:

Japanese (RAW, Digital): /g/3022736/79e3d6c678/

Base +45, Celibate_Wanker +14, golfpopo +7, Darknessend +7

That's a lot world-building for such a flat conclusion. Nice art though. Strong women are the best.

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看得懂英文，但英语的文字信息密度实在是太鸡巴低了，一页铺满了文字，唉等一个汉化

Base +6, 正义白次男 +5

slight error.

the twitter shouldn't be @Kugawa4423

it's @Kugara4423

Base +8

His next doujin will be Baiken x Bridget
@alephdalet
That's what it was on the original version as well, but maybe it was a typo or something.

It might be a waste of time since there is another translation, but I almost feel like updating this one by moving the speech bubbles over to the higher quality version.

Last edited on 06 October 2024, 16:54.

Base +6

I want more of the touhou one but I also really want this one to get a sequel...

Base +6