It's missing Frieren... And I think it would have been better if it had ended with both Frieren and Fern bound and pregnant in the goblins' caves, either looking truly broken... or eagerly waiting for more sex.

As it is, it's good, but it feels like it's missing that spark that would have made things truly great.

Of course, you could always do a part 2...

*Fingers crossed!.*

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*Fingers crossed!.* (I'll try!)

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Pregnant scene please +1

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